Ugly

Your eyes are shining embers, Beckoning the ones, Lost in storm of life sea. Persevering the sabotages, Turmoil brewing, But they ignore me, Why are you so repulsed , At the sight of me? Am I that ugly? Your hands are strong Upholding the beacon With mighty determination So why do they withdraw When I am crying At your feet? Why are you so repulsed , At the sight of me? Am I that ugly? Your voice is the sound that rings All the time in my mind Bitter but soft But why don't they ever Spell the name of me? Am I that ugly? I drift, I splash, I collide,I collapse, Just for one solce, Will you ever find me? Or You are just repulsed , At the sight of me I am that ugly .

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/11/2023 11:52:00 AM

Cutie Ugly you are surely and your words are most definitely not either

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/12/2023 12:24:00 PM

Sorry only just got it my apologies Curie spell check changed your name to Cutie

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/11/2023 12:08:00 PM

I mean you are not ugly

Curie Stark
Date: 9/11/2023 11:56:00 AM

What do you mean?

The Situation

Date: 8/21/2023 3:23:00 PM

Your insecurity is touching, I have insecurities too. But I also have hopes. A few opportunites. and even less sureity that i COULD ATTRACT. tHE SONG GOING THROUGH MY HEAD THESE DAYS. "Strait up now tell me is it going to be you and me together or are you just having fun?"

Curie Stark
Date: 8/23/2023 11:32:00 PM

Surely you will find a answer Just ask your heart what it wants and do it Glad you liked my poem

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2023 4:31:00 AM

Emotive and expressive work that you have penned in this one. Comparing the sea or ocean and the lighthouse to a human relationship very clever. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Curie Stark
Date: 8/18/2023 8:23:00 AM

Appreciate that