Ugly

Your eyes are shining embers,
Beckoning the ones,
Lost in storm of life sea.
Persevering the sabotages,
Turmoil brewing,
But they ignore me,
Why are you so repulsed ,
At the sight of me?
Am I that ugly?

Your hands are strong
Upholding the beacon
With mighty determination 
So why do they withdraw
When I am crying
At your feet?
Why are you so repulsed ,
At the sight of me?
Am I that ugly?

Your voice is the sound that rings
All the time in my mind
Bitter but soft
But why don't they ever
Spell the name of me?
Am I that ugly?

I drift, I splash,
I collide,I collapse,
Just for one solce, 
Will you ever find me?
Or
You are just repulsed ,
At the sight of me
I am that ugly .

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Date: 9/11/2023 11:52:00 AM
Cutie Ugly you are surely and your words are most definitely not either
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/12/2023 12:24:00 PM
Sorry only just got it my apologies Curie spell check changed your name to Cutie
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/11/2023 12:08:00 PM
I mean you are not ugly
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Curie Stark
Date: 9/11/2023 11:56:00 AM
What do you mean?
Date: 8/21/2023 3:23:00 PM
Your insecurity is touching, I have insecurities too. But I also have hopes. A few opportunites. and even less sureity that i COULD ATTRACT. tHE SONG GOING THROUGH MY HEAD THESE DAYS. "Strait up now tell me is it going to be you and me together or are you just having fun?"
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/23/2023 11:32:00 PM
Surely you will find a answer Just ask your heart what it wants and do it Glad you liked my poem
Date: 8/18/2023 4:31:00 AM
Emotive and expressive work that you have penned in this one. Comparing the sea or ocean and the lighthouse to a human relationship very clever. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/18/2023 8:23:00 AM
Appreciate that
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