Ugliness of Beauty

Your words the sweetest
Your face the loveliest
How you dress, the cleanest
How you walk, the smartest

Mesmerized, starstruck I was
Unmoved, glued feet I was
My eyes followed you
Taking note every cue

Your laughter echoed in clutter
Your voice makes you hotter
Fonder, wonder and yonder
I am to you thereafter

I wish it's all true though
Blinded I was, 
Cause behind such...
Is an "ugliness of beauty.."

By:
olive_eloi
12:38 am 
02/10/2014
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Date: 11/24/2014 12:58:00 PM
Ugliness and beauty are only words. Wonderful to the other, to the other absurd. Nice read again Olive, James....
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Date: 4/14/2014 2:48:00 PM
LOL even if you do, you are still the beauty and me the beast!!! :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/14/2014 3:46:00 PM
LOL!!!! :D FAIRYTALE :p
Date: 4/14/2014 2:28:00 PM
Hi there Olive, a wonderful poem!! Lucky you that you are beautiful both inside and out!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/14/2014 2:38:00 PM
:) thanks arthur.. :) hahahah.. :) but well i have torns an tails though sometimes.. :P
Date: 2/10/2014 6:05:00 AM
Such a deep one here my friend. Makes people stop and think about what you have written. :-)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/12/2014 11:26:00 AM
HAhaha mike it' about pretentious... Beauty in the outside but inside ugliness
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