Ugliness

UGLINESS There is an ugliness out there an ugliness that screams an ugliness that rages an ugliness that whispers It's whispers say everything is all right everything will resolve everything will be dreams, heaven when you vote for me It was always this way, right? To lead was to hate, fright those uncommitted to say protect me sir, from the death you preach as the brass bands play and sing your praises in a timeforgotten world while the world marches on, crazily without a leader

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2016 5:44:00 PM

fritz crytzer, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~

Fritz Crytzer
Date: 5/16/2016 4:53:00 PM

Thanks so much, Linda. Fritz the Cat

Fritz Crytzer
Date: 5/12/2016 6:28:00 PM

Thank you. Fritz the Cat

Fritz Crytzer

Date: 4/26/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thank you all for your welcome and comments. I am definitely an amateur, but do enjoy crafting paintings with words. Occasionally I do obtain a nice composition! I ma looking forward to posting another soon. - Fritz Crytzer

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2016 7:44:00 AM

- Welcome to Poetry Soup, Fritz :) - A great poem, well written :) - hugs // Sun :)

Fritz Crytzer
Date: 5/12/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thanks, Fritz the Cat

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2016 8:14:00 PM

Fritz, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Fritz Crytzer
Date: 5/12/2016 6:36:00 PM

A day late, and a dollar short! But, I am a retired Civil Servant, and have worked for the (OH GOD) U.S. Army for 30 years. I love writing poetry, and sometimes, just get carried away! I also read (who doesn't?), learn History, play a little beginner music, and, well, what else do you want to do? I am very eclectic, I guess. There is more, but . . . . ?

Moon Flower

Date: 4/24/2016 12:35:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Fritz. :)

Fritz Crytzer
Date: 5/12/2016 6:29:00 PM

That encourages me! Thanks! Fritz the Cat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2016 12:30:00 AM

Fritz,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Fritz Crytzer
Date: 6/22/2016 10:21:00 PM

I do want constructive criticism. am not afraid. I want to purify my thinking, simplify my mind, and make beautiful words! Help me with that, and you will be truly an Angel.

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 4/23/2016 8:50:00 PM

Deep poem, I feel you