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Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

My brain and heart battling 
Spinning can’t find my footing 
My world is dying 
Was this my doing?
On my face I am smiling
In my heart I am crying 
Took something that was beautiful and destroyed it

Copyright © Ale A A | Year Posted 2013

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Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 2/28/2013 1:30:00 PM I felt every word here..and I agree with your repsonse..that pain is a good thing, it reminds us that we are living. :) Login to Reply Ale A A Date: 3/1/2013 3:44:00 AM Thank you Pace for commenting.

Daver Austin Date: 2/27/2013 7:00:00 AM Sorry for the loss. Enjoyed the poem. daver Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/27/2013 5:08:00 AM Abigale...I feel every nuance of pain this poem portrays...Don't be so hard on yourself...we live and learn and keep moving forward. This is an very great write. Thanks for sharing. Also, thanks for your visit on my poem. I appreciate it. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/27/2013 4:48:00 AM - The feeling is painful, Abigale ! - Well written ! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Nate Spears Date: 2/26/2013 2:21:00 PM Nice, I have a poem called Death Of A Rose that shares the same expression!!! Love your work!!! Login to Reply Ale A A Date: 2/26/2013 7:51:00 PM Thanks Nate I will read it

Jack Ellison Date: 2/26/2013 12:33:00 PM We all go through these moments in our lives. Eventually it will pass and you'll wonder what all the fuss was about. There are exceptions to ever rule of course, but after 77 years, this what I have discovered. Keep 'em coming my dear Abigale... hugs, Jack xox Login to Reply Ale A A Date: 2/26/2013 7:53:00 PM Jack writing has been the best pain reliver of any alignments of the heart.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/26/2013 12:09:00 PM Abigale, i know the feeling,, and the hard part is when it can't be restored... they will never know how we get lost in one moment. xox~PD Login to Reply Ale A A Date: 2/26/2013 8:02:00 PM Thank you Poet Destroyer.

David Williams Date: 2/26/2013 11:19:00 AM Abigale it can be put right...David Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/26/2013 4:00:00 AM Deep soul searching question, the answer is this: Learning the ways of the world and of your heart. A painful process it is indeed, but suffering is the source of wisdom! I think part of the answer to your question you have seeing in my today's poem. You have done nothing wrong! Excellent work! Thank you!! Login to Reply Ale A A Date: 2/26/2013 4:17:00 AM No Thank you my dear Demetrios for your kind words.

Dan Kearley Date: 2/26/2013 3:36:00 AM A very touchy write here....I wish I could help with the pain.Stay strong and regain your footing. :o) Login to Reply Ale A A Date: 2/26/2013 3:38:00 AM Dan pain is a good thing. It reminds me I am still living.