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Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

My brain and heart battling 
Spinning can’t find my footing 
My world is dying 
Was this my doing?
On my face I am smiling
In my heart I am crying 
Took something that was beautiful and destroyed it

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Pace Ink-U-Script

February 28, 2013 at 1:30 PM

I felt every word here..and I agree with your repsonse..that pain is a good thing, it reminds us that we are living. :)

Ale A A

March 1, 2013 at 3:44 AM

Thank you Pace for commenting.

Daver Austin

February 27, 2013 at 7:00 AM

Sorry for the loss. Enjoyed the poem. daver

Eileen Manassian

February 27, 2013 at 5:08 AM

Abigale...I feel every nuance of pain this poem portrays...Don't be so hard on yourself...we live and learn and keep moving forward. This is an very great write. Thanks for sharing. Also, thanks for your visit on my poem. I appreciate it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 27, 2013 at 4:48 AM

- The feeling is painful, Abigale ! - Well written ! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nate Spears

February 26, 2013 at 2:21 PM

Nice, I have a poem called Death Of A Rose that shares the same expression!!! Love your work!!!

Ale A A

February 26, 2013 at 7:51 PM

Thanks Nate I will read it

Jack Ellison

February 26, 2013 at 12:33 PM

We all go through these moments in our lives. Eventually it will pass and you'll wonder what all the fuss was about. There are exceptions to ever rule of course, but after 77 years, this what I have discovered. Keep 'em coming my dear Abigale... hugs, Jack xox

Ale A A

February 26, 2013 at 7:53 PM

Jack writing has been the best pain reliver of any alignments of the heart.

Poet Destroyer A

February 26, 2013 at 12:09 PM

Abigale, i know the feeling,, and the hard part is when it can't be restored... they will never know how we get lost in one moment. xox~PD

Ale A A

February 26, 2013 at 8:02 PM

Thank you Poet Destroyer.

David Williams

February 26, 2013 at 11:19 AM

Abigale it can be put right...David

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 26, 2013 at 4:00 AM

Deep soul searching question, the answer is this: Learning the ways of the world and of your heart. A painful process it is indeed, but suffering is the source of wisdom! I think part of the answer to your question you have seeing in my today's poem. You have done nothing wrong! Excellent work! Thank you!!

Ale A A

February 26, 2013 at 4:17 AM

No Thank you my dear Demetrios for your kind words.