Ufo

United in thought
Forever as one 
Over the moon

© 12/04/2013 ~GG~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Graham Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 12:29 PM
As enigmatic as the subject.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations Mandy. Have a great weekend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Congrats on the winners list, Mandy. How goes it for you these days?
Posey Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Congratulations, sweetheart, well said..... Hugs to ya..... Jake
De La Croes Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations, Mandy! I'm over the moon with joy for you! David
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Mandy, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA
Oyewole Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Congrats on your beautiful thought and win,,, I love it~A.O
Bauer Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 4:29 PM
nice one, mandy!
Heemstra Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Thank you for the entry
Arowolo Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Short and lovely piece,Mandy...Congrats!,good to see this at the winners circle...
Ainsley Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 8:36 AM
like it!
Susan Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 12:34 AM
so romantic... best wishes in the contest :)
Curry Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:04 PM
I really like the strong message. thanks for your comments on my write. ran
Seal Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 7:15 PM
U Fantastic Observer, brilliant write Mandy, you've written a book in nine wonderful words. Take care, Richard
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 7:07 AM
Now this UFO I can relate too...great job Mandy...
Gorelick Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Very pretty..well done. BG
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 7:55 PM
oh, I love that last line. Sounds like over the moon in love!!
Richards Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 4:53 PM
You send us over the moon with such a beautiful and universal senryu! Love it, Mandy!
Horsman Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:20 PM
clever poetry is this....clever poet too!
Hunter Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Or under it...Great for the contest! Now why didn't I think of that?
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