Ufo

Until times end I will calmly wait for you
Forever thinking of things we used to do
Only time can erase the memories so true

Undaunted I consented to be your wife
Fearful and hopeful for our new life
Of which there was love and a little strife

Unfortunately it’s over time has revealed
Fundamental faults which couldn’t be healed
Only left with loving memories concealed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Very moving, congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 2:23 PM
Way to do the contest and win big, Seren!! Nicely done. Congratulations.
Posey Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 10:57 AM
Quite a unique and creative twist.... Congrats, dear lady, on a well deserved win..... Jake
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Well done a win under your belt Sass, love it xx
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Seren, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA
Johnson Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 5:16 PM
I'm sorry it ended this way. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Such a sad tale of the UFO.........touching this is!
Oyewole Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 4:37 PM
Congrats on your winning entry Seren~A.O
Arowolo Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Lovely piece,Seren..Nice job..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you,dear friend...
Heemstra Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Thank you for entering this poem into the contest.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Hi another sad and meaningful write Sass, should do well. xx
Jones Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Wonderful approach and. beautiful poem.....
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:19 PM
thanks Donna ....Seren
Sivey Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 7:26 PM
This is a very awesome write my friend! I am impressed with what you have done here Seren! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 8:07 PM
thank you Russell
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