U R a Queen

u r a queen

your walk

so elegant

so poised

your legs

like marble pillars

u r a queen

your smile

crafted beautifully

u r a queen

your hips

shaped like

the finest apple

in the orchard

u r a queen

your bosom

bloom like the lillies

on the sharon plain

u r a queen

your skin

your melanin

encases your inner beauty

so lovely

so powerful

u r a queen

your name

like a spreading parfum

how lovely is the fragrance

u r a queen

your beauty

far beyond words

u r a queen

your lips

so inviting

scarlet ribbon color

sweet like nectar

u r a queen

your soul

filled with honey and milk

far more fragrant

than a mountain of frankincense

so sweet

so citrusy

u r a queen

u r a queen

u r a queen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/12/2015 11:43:00 AM
The repetitive use of the phrase "u r a Queen" strengthens the message of this poem, one of admiration and beauty. This use of repetition is successful in this application and sets the mood for this poem and drives home the message presented. Emile.
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Delli Thami
Date: 4/12/2015 12:09:00 PM
thank you so much for your kind words ! thank you for also taking time to read my poem. - Delli
Date: 4/4/2015 4:41:00 PM
Reads like a beautiful song. Superb.
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Delli Thami
Date: 4/4/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. Thanks for also reading. :) - Delli
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