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U R A Queen

u r a queen your walk so elegant so poised your legs like marble pillars u r a queen your smile crafted beautifully u r a queen your hips shaped like the finest apple in the orchard u r a queen your bosom bloom like the lillies on the sharon plain u r a queen your skin your melanin encases your inner beauty so lovely so powerful u r a queen your name like a spreading parfum how lovely is the fragrance u r a queen your beauty far beyond words u r a queen your lips so inviting scarlet ribbon color sweet like nectar u r a queen your soul filled with honey and milk far more fragrant than a mountain of frankincense so sweet so citrusy u r a queen u r a queen u r a queen

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Date: 4/12/2015 11:43:00 AM
The repetitive use of the phrase "u r a Queen" strengthens the message of this poem, one of admiration and beauty. This use of repetition is successful in this application and sets the mood for this poem and drives home the message presented. Emile.
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Delli Thami
Date: 4/12/2015 12:09:00 PM
thank you so much for your kind words ! thank you for also taking time to read my poem. - Delli
Date: 4/4/2015 4:41:00 PM
Reads like a beautiful song. Superb.
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Delli Thami
Date: 4/4/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. Thanks for also reading. :) - Delli