Tyranny

With tyranny appreciated and coercion praised
The noble and gentle are bewildered and dazed

Today the world is simply disenchanted
     Tomorrow there will be many fingers raised
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Carrillo Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 6:16 PM
Very well written. thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Anish Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:21 PM
You capture the changes going in in our current world situation succinctly in this quatrain. Thank you for your kind words. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Yamin Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 5:11 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting on my Quatrain.
Christian Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:23 PM
thanks for your kind comments on my poem farthers day, it was mainly about my heavenly father but alwys love my dad 2 who passed over.
Yamin Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Diane! I am full of appreciation for the sentiments expressed
Palmer Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 3:13 PM
so many fingers raised,like it
Yamin Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Thanks for your very kind comments, Richard
Wesley Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Just checking to see what's going on here. Hope you are fully recovered and enjoying a pain free life. How was Portugal?
Yamin Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Thanks for your enquiry. Since the Operation I have had no more pain. I reached Portugal via Zurich on May 12. Here there is Spring Season. Very pleasant weather with lot of sunshine. Good atmosphere for rest and writing. Regards. -Mohammad
Wesley Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 7:17 PM
Just wondering how your back is; did you get any help or relief? Sore backs are so dibilitating. Hope all is well!
Yamin Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Thanks for your concern, Elizabeth. Incidentally, I happened to be in Karachi when it happened. I ran from one Orthopedic Surgeon to the other in top hospitals, all diagnosing Spinal Stenosis and advising surgery. Finally, I was advised to see a Neurosurgeon in the Naval Hospital Shifa. I went through the Surgery on March 7 followed by a three week physiotherapy. I am OK now and proposing to travel to Portugal on May 11 as the weather has become unbearably hot in Karachi. Regards. -Mohammad
Wesley Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 7:32 PM
Don't know what to say about the raised finger Mohammad; over here it has a less than saluatory meaning; hope these raised fingers don't start a war! :)
Yamin Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Thanks for your educated comments aand for your concern. The noble and the gentle that will raise the fingers tomorrow may mould the world opinion and peace will prevail. Hopefully
Effendi Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 9:03 AM
This one, like most others by you, speaks volumes, dear uncle.
Yamin Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Hussain. I feel honored.
Mohammed Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 1:43 PM
You are right Yamin!! Well thought.. Most true!!.. Love Diana
Yamin Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Diana. I am glad you share my thoughts.
Mjelde Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 2:02 PM
Nice, I like it... but also sad...whish you the best Mohammad. Love Laila
Yamin Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Laila. I am grateful
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Wish you all the best for today,tomorrow and the whole of your life Mohammad! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Yamin Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 11:47 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, Anne. I appreciate it
O'Leary Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 1:40 PM
A sad message... but with a ray of hope! I like! Terry
Yamin Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Thanks for reading my poem and your positive comments.
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