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Typically Luke Poem 9 - WHAT A MESS

This room is in an awful state Someone couldn't care less How could anybody live this way Such a terrible mess Wallpaper hangs from the walls A wardrobe is missing it's door An unmade bed full of crumbs And stuff all over the floor Something hangs from the ceiling That once upon a time gave out light Don't know what has gone on in here It looks like there has been a fight Piles of smelly socks stand in the corner There's a fish tank devoid of all fish And something furry that may once have been food Is growing in a dish I am not going to clean up this mess Like this it will just have to stay Isn't Luke a naughty boy For letting his bedroom get this way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/8/2013 12:27:00 PM
- I'm back .... missed "Luke poem" - Luke has been visited by a tornado .... lol. - Call 911!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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