Typewriter

Papers and ribbon bang on the floor The onion scent of white turning into coal, Smudges of lines trail into her veins Punching QWERTY keys on a chrome machine Under a lamp light soft as the pink moon; The screech of blotted pages dangle through rollers Waiting for her eyes to speak through hands. There lay the mumbled words curling up On a teak chair like nocturnal lyrics hauling raw drafts slowly glowing Into fresh contemplation, and the melt Of coffee stains drips on edges as she Folds another ream of leaves along bars, Riddled with ticktocks of a sleepless night. Then, fresh linings of thoughts bark at the winds While her lips drench inks of cappuccino Moistened among burning stars. 259 Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Konos Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 12:48 PM
That's excellent Nette...Congratulations
A   Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Congratulations.... enjoyed stopping by tonight ~LINDA
Jerden Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Lots of nice imagery here, Nettie. Congratulations on your win!
Peranteau Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Great write Nette ! Amazing how in the USA, The first six letters on the keyboard on the typewriter is, Q W E R T Y, and in continental Europe, the first six letters are, A Z E R T Y. I loved the way you incorporated Qwerty in this awesome write of yours ! I enjoyed reading you today dear poet ! Have a blessed day my Nette ! Much love, james
Devnath  Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 11:33 AM
Excellent way you have chosen to describe. Best of luck. Loved always, bl
Jones Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 7:22 AM
Very wondeful I can visualise this scene...
Agtani Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Hi Nette Nice to see you again in Soup. Such an outstanding entry! This is a great title as we know typewriters have been taken over by computers! Love Dalila
Poet Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:46 PM
Wonderful story of typewriter here Nette!Love this!
Richards Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 7:45 PM
You still have the magic in the keys, Nette.......(this time, the computer keys) !! What a wonderful entry!
Hunter Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Howdy, Nette...you doll, you. Your way of placing words never ceases to amaze me.
Sivey Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 11:40 AM
I am in awe of this awesome write my friend! You constantly amaze me with your writing, you can create an ambiance from out of nowhere! I am most impressed with this delightful poem, another grand accomplishment from your dedicated quill! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
Gasun Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 10:14 AM
An outstanding piece for the contest my dear friend Nette! I'm sure it will win! I'm planning to go to Mla. 'cuz i want to get something from the university where I took some MA units (unfinished MA 'cuz I left the country;))). I hope, I'll have enough time. As of now, I'm still in BKK & have 1 more wk.work. We're going to ask permission to the principal on Mon. 'coz we need to report already on the 7th of May. Oh my! How I wish I've enough time 4 my family. Fr. Clark to North takes 10hrs. I'll inform u ok. Thanks! love lots, Leonora
Tacito Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:56 AM
A fantastic moment captured so gracefully. Now I want a cappuccino! I don't even drink coffee! Well done! :)
Hendricks Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:07 AM
Good to have you back on board with your fine writing. Good luck to you in the contest, Nette. :)
Chircop Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Im glad you are back with your magnificent poetry Nette
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