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Twos company

You brought god to me, but told me we must wait You brought the devil too, he said name your date Decided to cut my losses, meet everyone half way For a life of heaven and hell, I wed you right away

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Lin Lane

Date: 8/8/2024 2:26:00 PM

My first thought...Life with that woman was sometimes like heaven, but lordy mercy... she could give the devil a run for his demonic ranting at other times. Shallow, but it's all I've got after a day of babysitting a one-year-old and a four-year-old.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/8/2024 3:52:00 PM

The accomplishment of being the instigators while trying to convince everyone they are the victims. BS

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2024 3:48:00 PM

Yeah and point the finger at their own delusional accomplishments, forgiveness is only for themselves

Lin Lane
Date: 8/8/2024 2:56:00 PM

Lol David. It was two days in a row after a week with a ten-year old. Grandkids are the greatest! For an agnostic, you’re pretty great, too. Haha. Some who claim to be Christian would rather point fingers of accusation rather than of forgiveness.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2024 2:50:00 PM

Hey they all got a fair slice of me Lin! I really am all in, in this one, if an agnostic can be all into anything that is, yeah go on your forgiven after that day you had, you’ve the patience of a saint lol! cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/7/2024 4:07:00 AM

Stand on a high point so you can see both directions, whoever wins go with that. The taliban used to do that change to the the side that was more powerful so they were always on the winning side. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/7/2024 4:49:00 AM

The enemy of my enemy is my friend. Yeah definitely a tactic of the taliban Tom, I suppose beats being on the losing side, life is never straightforward, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/6/2024 8:46:00 PM

Desperation at twenty-nine? Like the desperation at thirty-five for procreation! One can have a broken heart, livin' in misery. Two can really ease the pain like a perfect remedy. We estimate a long life of charm, don't we? I gave it a shot... a shout out to the wife? I must say, how sweet is Darlene, de ja vu`

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/7/2024 2:41:00 PM

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/7/2024 9:49:00 AM

I had a de ja vu` as I was writing of Darlene.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/7/2024 1:30:00 AM

Oh I’m not a romantic at heart Anaya, but yes finding balance between heaven and hell in marriage is definitely not easy, think I managed it in real life, and this post without excessive sentimentality, desperation is always more likely to fail, at least you gave it a couple of shots, Darlene is very sweet, (the fairy godmother on the soup) cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/6/2024 2:54:00 PM

Hello David Kavanagh, Love at first sight. Wow! Twos company. Cheers /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2024 10:29:00 AM

Hello David kavanagh, you are welcome. Cheers! /Darlene/

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/6/2024 3:53:00 PM

You are way too kind Darlene, I appreciate your Fav, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2024 3:45:00 PM

Hello Duke, you did a great job on this poem. It will be my fav. /Darlene/

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/6/2024 3:02:00 PM

Heya Darlene, I started out this one with something completely different in mind, then I seen an opportunity to bring balance to the dilemma, so yes love at first sight, and threw caution to the wind lol! cheers David