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Two Years

Two years of hell we have endured.
                                   
May I respectfully ask we all be cured.
                               
All troubles to leave~can that be insured.
                           
All blessings to be huge I want that secured.
                     
May only God come through our door I need for that to be assured.
 
Date Written:10/23/2021
 
BITE SIZE POEM no24 Poetry Contest
                               
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Date: 10/27/2021 2:08:00 AM
Very well done Paula, concise and to the point...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/29/2021 10:11:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this. Yes, to the point. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/26/2021 7:24:00 AM
Brilliant bite size poetry, Paula, the topic it seems we have all had to bare, good to see faith is playing a major part, in prayer and poetry.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/26/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Two Years write. Faith and prayer is needed. God is still in charge. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/25/2021 4:26:00 PM
I have much to say on the topic but I best not go on!! I pray only for common sense to prevaii!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/26/2021 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/25/2021 2:18:00 PM
Paula, God knows all and sees all, he is here ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/26/2021 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Yes, "God knows all and sees all." God is in charge. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/25/2021 8:13:00 AM
He is there. He’s never lost sight of us. Everything will eventually be rectified. Love your poem!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/25/2021 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love this Two Years write. You are right. He has always been here and He will make it all right. God is in charge. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/25/2021 1:26:00 AM
So awesome Pangie
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/25/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/24/2021 9:57:00 AM
HI Paula, No truer words have been expressed; you do it with elegance and I believe God is in charge we just need to be patient. Good Luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:27:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Yes, you are right when you say, "I believe God is in charge we just need to be patient." We do. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/24/2021 12:53:00 AM
A most lovely monorhyme poem based on faith, Paula. Divine help is always welcome. Regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this. You are so right when you say, "Divine help is always welcome." Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/23/2021 8:59:00 PM
Hey, let me know if you find an insurance company to underwrite your thought, Paula! Here's to a Healthy Return to 'Normal' for all of us! Hope and Healing, gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:22:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Yes, insurance company "GOD." Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/23/2021 6:27:00 PM
Dear Paul, from your heart to God's merciful soul dear. May he cure all disease and help us to feel safe again, laugh and hug and kiss our family friends and neighbors, once again, thankyou for Sharing, xo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:20:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this. Yes, make it all go away. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/23/2021 4:29:00 PM
This is reflective of how everyone feels about Covid. Well done
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/23/2021 2:48:00 PM
A lovely verse Paula, best wishes
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:17:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/23/2021 11:42:00 AM
Hello Paula Goldsmith , All I can add is Ames!! Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2021 10:58:00 AM
Hello Pala, Yes i lke your poem. Have a blessed day my friend. Hugs.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Two Years." Have a blessed autumn day.................
Date: 10/23/2021 11:28:00 AM
Oh Amen and Amen and Amen!!! Great one for the contest. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/24/2021 10:11:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Yes, Amen. Have a blessed autumn day.................