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Two Voices Alike

Within the dark mystery of twilight, He listens to two interchangeable discourses One, the gentle persuader, the other-- life’s blamer: Troubled by this seething exchanges, Both conscious and unconscious tones resound As the master's lungs boom pound onward To the nowhere of a mind, utterly disturbed. Regaining the gall to forge on with vigor Which seeks clarity from past misgivings, Rumbles escalate through mimicry's barbed language Amid the hole of evening…And to have known This quarrel, these twin voices muttering With such power he never imagined…until he Choked their loud acts, their vicious grandstanding That a mindful awareness is finally lifted, his redemption: So, pray tell... who is the sound-alike muppet, the conscious mind or the inner instinct? Favorite Poem Written In June 2018 for Broken Wings Posted 6/23/2018 Re-submitted 7/24/2018

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Date: 7/27/2018 5:15:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again on your win again. Well done!
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:04:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest, this is a beautiful poem and I can see why it is your favorite July win !
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Date: 7/26/2018 6:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette
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Date: 7/25/2018 12:17:00 PM
The eternal question?? Congratulations Nette, well done...
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:59:00 AM
Very clever and well written, Nette! Congratulations on your win...Hugs // Charlie
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Date: 7/24/2018 10:08:00 PM
Very thought-provoking WINNING poem, Nette! Janice
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Date: 6/28/2018 8:14:00 AM
Ahh, such a beautiful poem this is, many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest
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Date: 6/24/2018 5:50:00 AM
Well penned, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this clever, well-written poem. :)
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:47:00 AM
It's like man and his inner critic ! And you used the topic with such profundity; salute!
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Date: 6/23/2018 1:45:00 AM
I loved this and for sure I will read this a few more times, there is such depth here!!
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Date: 6/22/2018 5:01:00 PM
A deep discourse of twin voices..you made the exchanges come alive..written well as always..best for a win, nette.
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