Nette Onclaud Poet Dramatic Verse

Two Voices Alike

Regaining the gall to forge on with vigor
Which seeks clarity from past misgivings, 
Rumbles escalate through mimicry's barbed language
Amid  the hole of evening…And to have known
This quarrel, these twin voices muttering
With such power he never imagined…until he
Choked  their loud acts, their vicious grandstanding
That a mindful awareness is finally lifted,   his redemption:

So, pray tell...     who is the sound-alike muppet,
the conscious mind or the inner instinct?





Favorite Poem Written In June 2018 for Broken Wings
Posted  6/23/2018  Re-submitted 7/24/2018

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Susan Gentry July 27, 2018 at 5:15 PM Back to congratulate you again on your win again. Well done!

Constance La France July 26, 2018 at 7:04 PM Nette congratulations on your win in my contest, this is a beautiful poem and I can see why it is your favorite July win !

Joseph May July 26, 2018 at 6:58 AM Congrats on your win Nette

Charlie Smith July 25, 2018 at 12:17 PM The eternal question?? Congratulations Nette, well done...

Charles Messina July 25, 2018 at 5:59 AM Very clever and well written, Nette! Congratulations on your win...Hugs // Charlie

Janice Canerdy July 24, 2018 at 10:08 PM Very thought-provoking WINNING poem, Nette! Janice

Faraz Ajmal June 28, 2018 at 8:14 AM Ahh, such a beautiful poem this is, many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest

Line Gauthier June 24, 2018 at 5:50 AM Well penned, nette. Congrats on your win.

Susan Gentry June 23, 2018 at 9:24 PM Congratulations on your win with this clever, well-written poem. :)

Lyva Marty June 23, 2018 at 2:47 AM It's like man and his inner critic ! And you used the topic with such profundity; salute!

Arthur Vaso June 23, 2018 at 1:45 AM I loved this and for sure I will read this a few more times, there is such depth here!!

Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 5:01 PM A deep discourse of twin voices..you made the exchanges come alive..written well as always..best for a win, nette.