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Two Trains

The railroad ride was smooth as silk Though it was ten degrees. The train was just a minute late – No time to feel the freeze. We passed through towns of snow-topped homes While sitting warm and snug, The ticket taker’s attitude As friendly as a hug. But at Grand Central, we got off And had to make a switch To ride the city subway; Let’s enumerate each glitch: The crowded platform packed with people Cursing the delays; The trash-strewn tracks accruing more On which the rats will graze. Announcements stating that all trains Are locals, not express; Yet finally, we cram on board As all those bodies press. We go one stop and then the doors On certain cars won’t close. We’re ordered off and stumble out – Well, that’s the way it goes. We grab a cab and make it home And think of those two trains – Whatever calm the rail provides, The subway quickly drains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/7/2018 4:14:00 PM
Oh, the perils of life in NYC! I have not visited there in many, many years; and, although I realize there are, indeed (as your poem so clearly attests), many problems in such a people-packed place, NYC is still one of the "shining beacons on the hill" of current Western Civilization and world culture..,,,,,may it continue to thrive, in the face of all obstacles!
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Date: 1/7/2018 3:43:00 PM
Happy I don't live in New York city. I admire you for putting up with modern transportation. When I'm in Paris I make sure I have a friend who knows the Metro system! / M
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Date: 1/6/2018 10:16:00 PM
sounds like an unpleasant experience to me. But you wrote a cute poem about it, so that makes up for it! ;) Enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:24:00 PM
Boy can I relate to this one Ilene. I really hate being on crowded subways. Some trains in Europe are that way too at the busiest hours. You stand all the way to your destination. I had my CD player stolen on such a train. I enjoyed your perfectly rhymed poem Ilene. You are a master poet! ; )
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:03:00 PM
Quite the adventure...you never know what to expect in inclement weather
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