Two Timer's

The edges of my laced sewn thought 
Fences my heart when we are apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats..Sometimes my thoughts need to be laced up and calmed down..Great work..Sara
Bordner Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 11:11 PM
Strong image, clean optimism - J.A.B. %
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 3:35 PM
wow, you did GREAT with the challenge of this one. Love the lace metaphor.
Cheesman Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 10:49 PM
Oh very nicely done Joy - Shaz
Palmer Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 8:47 PM
nice write Joy
Johnson Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:12 PM
Very nice. Looks like a winner. About my poem. "To Forgive or Not" I was speaking from my own point of view only. and as if it were my own personal problem. Love, Joyce
Wellington Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 8:04 PM
I know it was your own personal thing dear Joyce, but just saying it matches my situation and I relate a lot. One love!
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