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Two Swans In a Pond

Two swans in a pond In symphonic dance Bowing to each other Submissive obeisance Meditating romance On rippled vows Rousing feathers In flirting advance Exchanging affections In a wordless song Courting seduction In dignified stance A sensuous replay Between stimulus And response Floating on arousal Sanctifying foreplay July 22, 2018 NOTE: Poem based on the video clip.

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Joseph May

Date: 1/5/2024 7:06:00 AM

Beautifully penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/23/2018 9:50:00 AM

Hi Vijay, another wonderful write from your pen, with such wonderful images. I love the content of this love dance. Your words draw one into the heart of the canvas they paint. Excellent Vijay. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2018 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Mike.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/1/2018 6:35:00 PM

Hello Vijay,I can just picture the swans doing this dance. Havea nice evening my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2018 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Darlene.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/29/2018 5:24:00 PM

Beautiful free verse with a touch of rhyme. Love your romantic swan dance leading to arousal and seduction. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2018 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/26/2018 8:53:00 AM

Vijay, this is BEAUTIFUL! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2018 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Janice

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/26/2018 8:20:00 AM

A SOOTHING PICTURE PAINTED BY A TRUE WORD ARTIST! A FAV...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/31/2018 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Robert..I truly appreciate your visit and value your opinion.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/25/2018 1:55:00 PM

This is so nice and I can clearly see it! Well written and thanks for sharing :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/26/2018 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Frances Schiavina

Date: 7/24/2018 11:30:00 AM

It's magnificent Vijay! You are a master artist bringing images to life.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2018 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Frances.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/24/2018 8:44:00 AM

What a sweet and lovely image you have created with this write, Vijay!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this morning Happy Tuesday!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2018 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Mike.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/24/2018 8:20:00 AM

Wow this is so cute and so beautifully written.Reads like a winner. Lovely work. ENjoyed it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/24/2018 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Supraja.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/23/2018 3:01:00 PM

Love swans ..Your poem creates serenity..and the beauty of romance.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/23/2018 10:58:00 AM

just glorious, vijay... swans are one of the most faithful creatures like the penguins... a sizzling portrayal of romance.. huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thank you nette.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/23/2018 8:14:00 AM

Beautifully done my friend...music and all...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thank you WW.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/23/2018 7:28:00 AM

You have captured these symbols of love in all their perfection. Loved this one, Vijay. Write- on, dear poet friend. SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thank you SuZ.

Roy Pett

Date: 7/23/2018 6:15:00 AM

Swans are so elegant and a joy to observe Vijay, your poem is exquisite and a joy to read my friend. :))

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thank you my friend..appreciate your comments.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/22/2018 10:15:00 PM

Your "Hot" flows like lava.. a slow danced burn. I love the line, "courting seduction". You know how to bring the heat, Vijay!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 7:13:00 AM

Thank you LM.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2018 6:44:00 PM

You were beautifully inspired, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 7:13:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/22/2018 4:51:00 PM

your pen draws beautifully vijay excellent piece i pray you have a blessed week

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/23/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thank you Liam.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/22/2018 3:13:00 PM

your word it is that brings to life the video Vijay.. awesome poetry.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/22/2018 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Harry..I appreciate your kind feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/22/2018 9:57:00 AM

I love watching swans in the water. They hold such grace and beauty, You describe them very well. Thanks for sharing, have a great Sunday dear poet

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/22/2018 3:59:00 PM

They certainly are a pleasure to watch..hinting love and romance..many thanks Pixie..appreciate your comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/22/2018 8:42:00 AM

Romance so pure and artistic that only a heart appreciating love could ever portray in verses sublime, dear Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/22/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thank you my friend--always happy to read your insights.

Robertina B.

Date: 7/22/2018 8:27:00 AM

Vijay, your free verse is an absolute gem!! So magnificent , it had me in a trance.. Enjoyed it tremendously! Many blessings, my friend..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/22/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words Robertina..your feedback is always appreciated.

Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 7/22/2018 8:11:00 AM

Loverly !! Thank You Vijay Pandit !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/22/2018 3:55:00 PM

Appreciate your visit and comments Paris-Maree..many thanks.