Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

Two Swans In a Pond

Two swans in a pond
In symphonic dance
Bowing to each other
Submissive obeisance

Meditating romance
On rippled vows
Rousing feathers
In flirting advance
Exchanging affections
In a wordless song 

Courting seduction
In dignified stance

A sensuous replay
Between stimulus
And response
Floating on arousal
Sanctifying foreplay

July 22, 2018
NOTE: Poem based on the video clip.

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Joseph May January 5, 2024 at 7:06 AM Beautifully penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read

Vladislav Raven October 23, 2018 at 9:50 AM Hi Vijay, another wonderful write from your pen, with such wonderful images. I love the content of this love dance. Your words draw one into the heart of the canvas they paint. Excellent Vijay. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike. Vijay Pandit October 23, 2018 at 9:57 AM Thank you Mike.

Darlene De Beaulieu September 1, 2018 at 6:35 PM Hello Vijay,I can just picture the swans doing this dance. Havea nice evening my friend. Vijay Pandit October 23, 2018 at 9:57 AM Thank you Darlene.

Paul Callus July 29, 2018 at 5:24 PM Beautiful free verse with a touch of rhyme. Love your romantic swan dance leading to arousal and seduction. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit July 31, 2018 at 5:23 PM Thank you Paul.

Janice Canerdy July 26, 2018 at 8:53 AM Vijay, this is BEAUTIFUL! Janice Vijay Pandit July 31, 2018 at 5:23 PM Thank you Janice

Robert Lindley July 26, 2018 at 8:20 AM A SOOTHING PICTURE PAINTED BY A TRUE WORD ARTIST! A FAV... Vijay Pandit July 31, 2018 at 5:23 PM Thank you Robert..I truly appreciate your visit and value your opinion.

Heidi Sands July 25, 2018 at 1:55 PM This is so nice and I can clearly see it! Well written and thanks for sharing :) Vijay Pandit July 26, 2018 at 7:21 AM Thank you Heidi.

Frances Schiavina July 24, 2018 at 11:30 AM It's magnificent Vijay! You are a master artist bringing images to life. Vijay Pandit July 24, 2018 at 3:17 PM Thank you Frances.

Mike Gentile July 24, 2018 at 8:44 AM What a sweet and lovely image you have created with this write, Vijay!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this morning Happy Tuesday!! Vijay Pandit July 24, 2018 at 10:30 AM Thank you Mike.

Supraja Kannan July 24, 2018 at 8:20 AM Wow this is so cute and so beautifully written.Reads like a winner. Lovely work. ENjoyed it. Vijay Pandit July 24, 2018 at 10:30 AM Thank you Supraja.

Charmaine Chircop July 23, 2018 at 3:01 PM Love swans ..Your poem creates serenity..and the beauty of romance. Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 4:43 PM Thank you Charmaine.

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2018 at 10:58 AM just glorious, vijay... swans are one of the most faithful creatures like the penguins... a sizzling portrayal of romance.. huggs Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 4:42 PM Thank you nette.

Winged Warrior July 23, 2018 at 8:14 AM Beautifully done my friend...music and all...^WW^ Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 4:42 PM Thank you WW.

Suzanne Delaney July 23, 2018 at 7:28 AM You have captured these symbols of love in all their perfection. Loved this one, Vijay. Write- on, dear poet friend. SuZ Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 4:42 PM Thank you SuZ.

Roy Pett July 23, 2018 at 6:15 AM Swans are so elegant and a joy to observe Vijay, your poem is exquisite and a joy to read my friend. :)) Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 7:14 AM Thank you my friend..appreciate your comments.

Lyric Man July 22, 2018 at 10:15 PM Your "Hot" flows like lava.. a slow danced burn. I love the line, "courting seduction". You know how to bring the heat, Vijay!! Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 7:13 AM Thank you LM.

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2018 at 6:44 PM You were beautifully inspired, Vijay! Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 7:13 AM Thank you Andrea.

Liam Mcdaid July 22, 2018 at 4:51 PM your pen draws beautifully vijay excellent piece i pray you have a blessed week Vijay Pandit July 23, 2018 at 7:12 AM Thank you Liam.

Harry Horsman July 22, 2018 at 3:13 PM your word it is that brings to life the video Vijay.. awesome poetry. Vijay Pandit July 22, 2018 at 3:59 PM Thank you Harry..I appreciate your kind feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose July 22, 2018 at 9:57 AM I love watching swans in the water. They hold such grace and beauty, You describe them very well. Thanks for sharing, have a great Sunday dear poet Vijay Pandit July 22, 2018 at 3:59 PM They certainly are a pleasure to watch..hinting love and romance..many thanks Pixie..appreciate your comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 22, 2018 at 8:42 AM Romance so pure and artistic that only a heart appreciating love could ever portray in verses sublime, dear Vijay! Vijay Pandit July 22, 2018 at 3:56 PM Thank you my friend--always happy to read your insights.

Robertina B. July 22, 2018 at 8:27 AM Vijay, your free verse is an absolute gem!! So magnificent , it had me in a trance.. Enjoyed it tremendously! Many blessings, my friend.. Vijay Pandit July 22, 2018 at 3:56 PM Thank you for the kind words Robertina..your feedback is always appreciated.

Paris-Maree Boreham July 22, 2018 at 8:11 AM Loverly !! Thank You Vijay Pandit !!! Vijay Pandit July 22, 2018 at 3:55 PM Appreciate your visit and comments Paris-Maree..many thanks.