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Two Swans In a Pond

Two swans in a pond
In symphonic dance
Bowing to each other
Submissive obeisance

Meditating romance
On rippled vows
Rousing feathers
In flirting advance
Exchanging affections
In a wordless song 

Courting seduction
In dignified stance

A sensuous replay
Between stimulus
And response
Floating on arousal
Sanctifying foreplay

July 22, 2018
NOTE: Poem based on the video clip.

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2018

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Joseph May Date: 1/5/2024 7:06:00 AM Beautifully penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/23/2018 9:50:00 AM Hi Vijay, another wonderful write from your pen, with such wonderful images. I love the content of this love dance. Your words draw one into the heart of the canvas they paint. Excellent Vijay. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/23/2018 9:57:00 AM Thank you Mike.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/1/2018 6:35:00 PM Hello Vijay,I can just picture the swans doing this dance. Havea nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/23/2018 9:57:00 AM Thank you Darlene.

Paul Callus Date: 7/29/2018 5:24:00 PM Beautiful free verse with a touch of rhyme. Love your romantic swan dance leading to arousal and seduction. Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/31/2018 5:23:00 PM Thank you Paul.

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/26/2018 8:53:00 AM Vijay, this is BEAUTIFUL! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/31/2018 5:23:00 PM Thank you Janice

Robert Lindley Date: 7/26/2018 8:20:00 AM A SOOTHING PICTURE PAINTED BY A TRUE WORD ARTIST! A FAV... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/31/2018 5:23:00 PM Thank you Robert..I truly appreciate your visit and value your opinion.

Heidi Sands Date: 7/25/2018 1:55:00 PM This is so nice and I can clearly see it! Well written and thanks for sharing :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/26/2018 7:21:00 AM Thank you Heidi.

Frances Schiavina Date: 7/24/2018 11:30:00 AM It's magnificent Vijay! You are a master artist bringing images to life. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/24/2018 3:17:00 PM Thank you Frances.

Mike Gentile Date: 7/24/2018 8:44:00 AM What a sweet and lovely image you have created with this write, Vijay!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this morning Happy Tuesday!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/24/2018 10:30:00 AM Thank you Mike.

Supraja Kannan Date: 7/24/2018 8:20:00 AM Wow this is so cute and so beautifully written.Reads like a winner. Lovely work. ENjoyed it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/24/2018 10:30:00 AM Thank you Supraja.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/23/2018 3:01:00 PM Love swans ..Your poem creates serenity..and the beauty of romance. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 4:43:00 PM Thank you Charmaine.

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/23/2018 10:58:00 AM just glorious, vijay... swans are one of the most faithful creatures like the penguins... a sizzling portrayal of romance.. huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 4:42:00 PM Thank you nette.

Winged Warrior Date: 7/23/2018 8:14:00 AM Beautifully done my friend...music and all...^WW^ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 4:42:00 PM Thank you WW.

Suzanne Delaney Date: 7/23/2018 7:28:00 AM You have captured these symbols of love in all their perfection. Loved this one, Vijay. Write- on, dear poet friend. SuZ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 4:42:00 PM Thank you SuZ.

Roy Pett Date: 7/23/2018 6:15:00 AM Swans are so elegant and a joy to observe Vijay, your poem is exquisite and a joy to read my friend. :)) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 7:14:00 AM Thank you my friend..appreciate your comments.

Lyric Man Date: 7/22/2018 10:15:00 PM Your "Hot" flows like lava.. a slow danced burn. I love the line, "courting seduction". You know how to bring the heat, Vijay!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 7:13:00 AM Thank you LM.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/22/2018 6:44:00 PM You were beautifully inspired, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 7:13:00 AM Thank you Andrea.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 7/22/2018 4:51:00 PM your pen draws beautifully vijay excellent piece i pray you have a blessed week Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/23/2018 7:12:00 AM Thank you Liam.

Harry Horsman Date: 7/22/2018 3:13:00 PM your word it is that brings to life the video Vijay.. awesome poetry. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/22/2018 3:59:00 PM Thank you Harry..I appreciate your kind feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/22/2018 9:57:00 AM I love watching swans in the water. They hold such grace and beauty, You describe them very well. Thanks for sharing, have a great Sunday dear poet Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/22/2018 3:59:00 PM They certainly are a pleasure to watch..hinting love and romance..many thanks Pixie..appreciate your comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/22/2018 8:42:00 AM Romance so pure and artistic that only a heart appreciating love could ever portray in verses sublime, dear Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/22/2018 3:56:00 PM Thank you my friend--always happy to read your insights.

Robertina B. Date: 7/22/2018 8:27:00 AM Vijay, your free verse is an absolute gem!! So magnificent , it had me in a trance.. Enjoyed it tremendously! Many blessings, my friend.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/22/2018 3:56:00 PM Thank you for the kind words Robertina..your feedback is always appreciated.

Paris-Maree Boreham Date: 7/22/2018 8:11:00 AM Loverly !! Thank You Vijay Pandit !!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/22/2018 3:55:00 PM Appreciate your visit and comments Paris-Maree..many thanks.