Two Strangers

Two strangers at night
Fill each other---full delight
Still unknown, their names hidden
Each heart does flutter
Giving the green to explore
Extreme passion in high gear

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 27, 2011 at 9:14 PM
This reminded me of a scene in "Saturday Night Fever". This is a very descriptive well-written sedoka.
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