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Two Souls Excited

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              My eyes closed
         just but for the second

               it seemed for
              length of days

          she made me tarry

        And as my eyes gave
           to my brain birth
           there she stood
         her eyes gleaming
                her arms
          and tumid breast
                 salient 

         Two souls excited
                ignited

Copyright © James Peranteau | Year Posted 2009

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C.C Bloomsfield Date: 9/11/2009 4:16:00 AM missing yearning till her soul finds your soul again,a lovely poem,hope she did.Celina Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/7/2009 5:01:00 PM nicely penned, free verse is so liberating. Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 9/6/2009 12:20:00 AM Excellent poetry James.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 9/5/2009 5:41:00 PM love at first sight? jhl Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 9/5/2009 12:42:00 PM Stunning and beautiful James...Raul Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 9/5/2009 9:44:00 AM James - excellent passion in this well written piece - Reminds me of the first time I met my wife - God Bless, mj Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/5/2009 7:11:00 AM So much passion wrapped up in so few words! On fire, James!! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/5/2009 6:04:00 AM There she stood again her eyes gleaming as their two souls excited ignited.....these words are so strong.... love between two hearts..than a deeper description..love of two souls,no greater love than that...excellent write----charma Login to Reply