James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Two Souls Excited

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              My eyes closed
         just but for the second

               it seemed for
              length of days

          she made me tarry

        And as my eyes gave
           to my brain birth
           there she stood
         her eyes gleaming
                her arms
          and tumid breast
                 salient 

         Two souls excited
                ignited

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C.C Bloomsfield September 11, 2009 at 4:16 AM missing yearning till her soul finds your soul again,a lovely poem,hope she did.Celina

Doris Culverhouse September 7, 2009 at 5:01 PM nicely penned, free verse is so liberating.

Brian Strand September 6, 2009 at 12:20 AM Excellent poetry James.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today

John Loving Iii September 5, 2009 at 5:41 PM love at first sight? jhl

Raul Moreno September 5, 2009 at 12:42 PM Stunning and beautiful James...Raul

Michael Jordan September 5, 2009 at 9:44 AM James - excellent passion in this well written piece - Reminds me of the first time I met my wife - God Bless, mj

Carrie Richards September 5, 2009 at 7:11 AM So much passion wrapped up in so few words! On fire, James!! ~ Carrie

Charmaine Chircop September 5, 2009 at 6:04 AM There she stood again her eyes gleaming as their two souls excited ignited.....these words are so strong.... love between two hearts..than a deeper description..love of two souls,no greater love than that...excellent write----charma