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Two Souls Excited

. My eyes closed just but for the second it seemed for length of days she made me tarry And as my eyes gave to my brain birth there she stood her eyes gleaming her arms and tumid breast salient Two souls excited ignited

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C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 9/11/2009 4:16:00 AM

missing yearning till her soul finds your soul again,a lovely poem,hope she did.Celina

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/7/2009 5:01:00 PM

nicely penned, free verse is so liberating.

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2009 12:20:00 AM

Excellent poetry James.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/5/2009 5:41:00 PM

love at first sight? jhl

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/5/2009 12:42:00 PM

Stunning and beautiful James...Raul

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/5/2009 9:44:00 AM

James - excellent passion in this well written piece - Reminds me of the first time I met my wife - God Bless, mj

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/5/2009 7:11:00 AM

So much passion wrapped up in so few words! On fire, James!! ~ Carrie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/5/2009 6:04:00 AM

There she stood again her eyes gleaming as their two souls excited ignited.....these words are so strong.... love between two hearts..than a deeper description..love of two souls,no greater love than that...excellent write----charma