'two Souls'

two souls uniquely converse the air heavy with passion our hands discover new depths our moist lips connect

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Robert Ball

Date: 4/5/2011 6:52:00 AM

the six is because it was short, but it was sweet,thanks for your kind words, keep the poetry coming your good and may God lead you in your path God bless

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2011 10:05:00 AM

It appears these two souls became "one" as passion filled the air. Excellent dodoitsu, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Judy Konos

Date: 4/3/2011 5:16:00 AM

What I find unique about "Two Souls" is the double standard. Could mean embraced in the arms of humanity or possibly mean Spirits . A good Sunday wake up ...thanks..Judy

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 7:15:00 PM

Hmm..feeling the passion!---kash

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/2/2011 4:18:00 PM

Very very sensual and passionate write, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2011 3:38:00 PM

Well what a WOW write Wilma my friend.. intense.. passionate... sensuous..inviting.. tempting.. awesome... and on and on..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 1:00:00 PM

This is delicious, Wilma. Love it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2011 12:56:00 PM

Very senuous and romantic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/2/2011 12:55:00 PM

We are on the same page today my darling, must have been a hell of a class, where do I enroll lol just kidding, you know me by now.... sweet and tender is the feelings that touch me in this wonderful write...wih love Michael