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'two Souls'

two souls uniquely converse 
the air heavy with passion
our hands discover new depths   
our moist lips connect

passiondodoitsu

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Robert Ball

April 5, 2011 at 6:52 AM

the six is because it was short, but it was sweet,thanks for your kind words, keep the poetry coming your good and may God lead you in your path God bless

Carolyn Devonshire

April 3, 2011 at 10:05 AM

It appears these two souls became "one" as passion filled the air. Excellent dodoitsu, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Judy Konos

April 3, 2011 at 5:16 AM

What I find unique about "Two Souls" is the double standard. Could mean embraced in the arms of humanity or possibly mean Spirits . A good Sunday wake up ...thanks..Judy

Kash Poet

April 2, 2011 at 7:15 PM

Hmm..feeling the passion!---kash

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 2, 2011 at 4:18 PM

Very very sensual and passionate write, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 2, 2011 at 3:38 PM

Well what a WOW write Wilma my friend.. intense.. passionate... sensuous..inviting.. tempting.. awesome... and on and on..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

April 2, 2011 at 1:00 PM

This is delicious, Wilma. Love it!

Sara Kendrick

April 2, 2011 at 12:56 PM

Very senuous and romantic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

April 2, 2011 at 12:55 PM

We are on the same page today my darling, must have been a hell of a class, where do I enroll lol just kidding, you know me by now.... sweet and tender is the feelings that touch me in this wonderful write...wih love Michael

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