Two Skaters

Down the lane in the summer sun-
that's where I long to go;
down where the trees bend low with shade 
and the creek widens and slows.

Down were the city sidewalk starts
by the road running smooth and wide,
meet me there with your roller skates;
we will skate hand in hand, side by side.

Around my neck and around yours, too,
hangs a piece of string with a key
to tighten our skates when they get too loose
as we glide there, just you and me.

All afternoon in the happy sun
we will skate back and forth in the wind
sharing our secrets, being carefree,
on this perfect day for just being friends.

When we are tired we will take a break
and sit in the shade of a tree;
we will drink soda pop and eat crackerjacks
and add to our store of sweet memories.

How I would love to travel back there
to the time we were young and free,
that day we shared in the summer sun
when you gave me your crackerjack key.

Copyright, July 8, 2016
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Sweet memories of a simpler time. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem on FB today! Hugs, Rhonda
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Fabulous poem. Worthy placing.
Onclaud Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 4:43 PM
belated cheers faye... love this and huggs
Kimathi Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 4:53 AM
Hi Faye. Congrats on your top placement n the contest!! ;-)
Rycroft Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Great poem well written xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Lovely summer friendship! Congrats, Faye!
Chansarkar Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Old days and old friends are always a source of joy,many congrats Faye!
Selfa Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Great write Faye! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
Y. Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Hi Faye, Congrats on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations Faye, well done...
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Oh, the simple life, Faye. I so much enjoyed your poem taking me back to those days. Such a wonderful take on the theme. Well written, and congrats on your well-deserved 3rd place podium win 7 Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:15 PM
wonderful memories in your poem congrats on your win Faye:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Faye, this one yanked on my nostalgic chain. I remember those skate keys and my mother's admonition to stop ruining my school shoes with those "things". The "gift" of the crackerjack prize.....Thanks for taking me down that hill with no way to stop one more time. Appreciate your participation in the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Faye, I just loved this sweet vignette. I have a similar memory shared with my cousin Linda. It is poetry like this that sweeten our days. Thank you my friend! 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:14 PM
oh this is adorable. It was a crackerjack key!! So cute. And did he give you a crackerjack wedding ring too!!!
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