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Two Skaters

Down the lane in the summer sun- that's where I long to go; down where the trees bend low with shade and the creek widens and slows. Down were the city sidewalk starts by the road running smooth and wide, meet me there with your roller skates; we will skate hand in hand, side by side. Around my neck and around yours, too, hangs a piece of string with a key to tighten our skates when they get too loose as we glide there, just you and me. All afternoon in the happy sun we will skate back and forth in the wind sharing our secrets, being carefree, on this perfect day for just being friends. When we are tired we will take a break and sit in the shade of a tree; we will drink soda pop and eat crackerjacks and add to our store of sweet memories. How I would love to travel back there to the time we were young and free, that day we shared in the summer sun when you gave me your crackerjack key. Copyright, July 8, 2016 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 2/25/2017 2:26:00 PM
Sweet memories of a simpler time. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem on FB today! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:50:00 AM
Fabulous poem. Worthy placing.
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Date: 7/23/2016 4:43:00 PM
belated cheers faye... love this and huggs
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Date: 7/23/2016 4:53:00 AM
Hi Faye. Congrats on your top placement n the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/22/2016 2:34:00 PM
Great poem well written xxx
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Date: 7/21/2016 5:43:00 PM
Lovely summer friendship! Congrats, Faye!
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Date: 7/21/2016 12:16:00 PM
Old days and old friends are always a source of joy,many congrats Faye!
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:14:00 AM
Great write Faye! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
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Date: 7/21/2016 8:10:00 AM
Hi Faye, Congrats on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations Faye, well done...
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:47:00 PM
Oh, the simple life, Faye. I so much enjoyed your poem taking me back to those days. Such a wonderful take on the theme. Well written, and congrats on your well-deserved 3rd place podium win 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:15:00 PM
wonderful memories in your poem congrats on your win Faye:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:52:00 PM
Faye, this one yanked on my nostalgic chain. I remember those skate keys and my mother's admonition to stop ruining my school shoes with those "things". The "gift" of the crackerjack prize.....Thanks for taking me down that hill with no way to stop one more time. Appreciate your participation in the contest
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Date: 7/9/2016 5:38:00 PM
Faye, I just loved this sweet vignette. I have a similar memory shared with my cousin Linda. It is poetry like this that sweeten our days. Thank you my friend! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/8/2016 6:14:00 PM
oh this is adorable. It was a crackerjack key!! So cute. And did he give you a crackerjack wedding ring too!!!
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