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Two Sides of the Divide

Loved tender, passionate wanting, panting, joining friendship, pal, foe, enemies hurting, harming, abhorring dis-likable, detestable Hated < My first attempt at this form > http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life.php

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/8/2009 7:36:00 AM

Wonderful first attemped, James! Excellence in form and sentiment! The title rocks, too! Love, Robin

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/29/2009 3:01:00 PM

YOU DID WONDEFUL MY FRIEND AS ALWAYS GREAT PIECE I LOVE YOUR WEBSITE BY THE WAY THATS MY NEXT STEP THEN HOPEFULLY GETTING PUBLISHED KEEP WRITING

Diane Christian

Date: 6/29/2009 11:39:00 AM

a good write, it speaks loud and great message, I could not write this style it is hard well wrote, God bless you

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/28/2009 7:32:00 PM

I never tried it ... and if do get brave enough, it will be in your shadow. Bravo.

Karla Null

Date: 6/28/2009 6:23:00 PM

Nice job! Karla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/28/2009 4:03:00 PM

Interesting poem. Sara

Date: 6/28/2009 3:21:00 PM

The title is so fitting for this poem. Nice job with this challenging form. I think you've got it! Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 2:30:00 PM

Amazing how this poem progresses from the best of emotions to the worst. I wasn't familiar with the diamante form before, James. Thanks for this incredible introduction! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/28/2009 1:52:00 PM

Nice work, I wrote a choka for you to see...Raul