James Fraser Poet Diamante

Two Sides of the Divide

Loved
 tender, passionate
 wanting, panting, joining
 friendship, pal, foe, enemies
 hurting, harming, abhorring
 dis-likable, detestable
 Hated

< My first attempt at this form >


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Robin L. Gass October 8, 2009 at 7:36 AM Wonderful first attemped, James! Excellence in form and sentiment! The title rocks, too! Love, Robin

Brandy Megens June 29, 2009 at 3:01 PM YOU DID WONDEFUL MY FRIEND AS ALWAYS GREAT PIECE I LOVE YOUR WEBSITE BY THE WAY THATS MY NEXT STEP THEN HOPEFULLY GETTING PUBLISHED KEEP WRITING

Diane Christian June 29, 2009 at 11:39 AM a good write, it speaks loud and great message, I could not write this style it is hard well wrote, God bless you

L'Nass Shango June 28, 2009 at 7:32 PM I never tried it ... and if do get brave enough, it will be in your shadow. Bravo.

Karla Null June 28, 2009 at 6:23 PM Nice job! Karla

Sara Kendrick June 28, 2009 at 4:03 PM Interesting poem. Sara

June 28, 2009 at 3:21 PM The title is so fitting for this poem. Nice job with this challenging form. I think you've got it! Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire June 28, 2009 at 2:30 PM Amazing how this poem progresses from the best of emotions to the worst. I wasn't familiar with the diamante form before, James. Thanks for this incredible introduction! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno June 28, 2009 at 1:52 PM Nice work, I wrote a choka for you to see...Raul