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Two Shoes

two shoes under the chair waiting for somewhere to go and someone to go with looking lonely but only just waiting for the weather to clear

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Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/10/2017 12:30:00 AM

I love the lines waiting for somewhere to go..waiting for weather to clear. Rudolph you put life into things of everyday use.

Daver Austin

Date: 7/15/2015 1:54:00 PM

Totally amusing. Congrats on the selection. daver

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 7/13/2015 9:29:00 AM

Smart and lovely!! Bravo!

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2015 1:05:00 AM

Lovely, poem Rudolph, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/1/2014 6:10:00 PM

Hello Rudolph, This was short but powerfully said. Loved it. Thank you for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah

Cona Adams

Date: 4/17/2014 9:00:00 AM

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

Cona Adams

Date: 4/17/2014 9:00:00 AM

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

Ralph Mason

Date: 4/16/2014 2:37:00 PM

enjoyed your poem especially the ending. warm thoughts, Ralph

Naji Almurisi

Date: 4/16/2014 1:04:00 PM

so beautiful ..go on

Ajeyemi Wasiu Ajewumi

Date: 4/15/2014 11:03:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL

Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 4/14/2014 4:14:00 AM

great topic follow it up with a part two and three where do the shoes want to go? who do they belong to? who can you become by walking in those shoes? I wanted more!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/13/2014 11:38:00 PM

I read this to my 7yr old granddaughter. Thumbs up. I read to her always I as well give it a thumbs :)

Kj Force

Date: 4/13/2014 11:26:00 PM

Rudolph...Simple words painting a simple picture of the basics of life...thus a flip flop in the way we view life... liked...

Tilahun Nigatu

Date: 4/13/2014 8:15:00 PM

Superb!

Karen Murphy

Date: 4/13/2014 7:46:00 PM

I loved your poem! It brought a chuckle and a smile to my face. Reminding me of all the days we were stuck indoors from the snowstorms that seemed endless here in NJ. Very simply written and straight to the point. Let's GO OUT!! The sun is finally shining!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you.