Two Pair of Shoes

Forgotten with dust in a showcase Rest two pair of silver high heel Memory of a singer Winner of song prizes Loser in her life Privileged voice Turned off by A bad Choice July 30, 2017

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2017 6:44:00 PM

amazing theme for the contest, nayda... i like where you took this poem; glamor and fame wither..wow!...huggs

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/2/2017 9:51:00 AM

Nicely composed. Wishing best for contest

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/2/2017 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Anisha.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/30/2017 1:31:00 AM

It's amazing what shoes go through in their lifetime and what they see and experience lol...nice take on the contest Nayda...god bless...^WW^

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/30/2017 3:18:00 PM

Thank you WW.