Two Old Flames

Two Old Flames

Holding Hands In The Park

Always Together


He gives Her A Rose.

Sixty Years With Her A Joy,

He Is Thankful For.


She Squeezes Him Tight.

Kissing Him On The Cheek,

And Never Regrets.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Belated congratulations to you on your win in Brian's "Four To Fourteen" contest Christopher. Love, Carol
Bunton Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Thank you!!!
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win Christopher. These are decently descriptive senryu entries.
Bunton Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 7:21 PM
Thank You!!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 8:54 AM
congrats Christopher on your HM in the contest luv.. superb lines..
Bunton Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Thank You!!
Quigley Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 8:30 AM
For me, this is very timely. We celebrate our 50th anniversary today. Congratulations on your win Christopher
Bunton Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Thank You!!
Arno Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful write. Jon
Bunton Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Thank You!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations Christopher x
Bunton Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Thank You!!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Congrats on your win! I place these senryus among my faves!! Blessings, Rhonda :)
Bunton Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Thank You!!
Aul Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 2:39 PM
Really touching.........George
Bunton Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:30 PM
These are very sweet, Christopher. Are they for the love senryu contest? Good luck in the contest if so!
Bunton Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:42 PM
I wrote it for the contest, but then noticed that she wanted strict 5-7-5, so it's just for fun. :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 9:22 PM
The kind of love everyone hopes for, lasting and with no regrets! Loved it! Blessings, Rhonda
Bunton Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Thank You!!
Merryman Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 9:19 PM
This is so sweet! Well done, Christopher. Love, Kim
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January 26, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Thank You!
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