Two of a Kind

Two peas in a pod....they are two of a kind
I can't help but smile, while I sit on the stump
By the old front porch, and watch them romp
In the warm autumn sun, on the cool green grass
Of the vast front yard ....where I clear my mind

This granddaughter, fair, and our golden lab
How can the same spirit flow from here to there?
From canine to child, as they dance the dance
And prance the prance, as if one and the same
As they play their game....as if souls have exchanged

I shake my head, wondering.... which is which?
With Claire hollering as loud as I imagine she can
Quince wags his tail, like a circular fan...
If she could wag and he could holler
They would gladly trade places, I'll bet you a dollar

Claire running in circles, and he follows her lead
Claire jumping high, and he tries to exceed 
Two of a kind, with spirits to spare
That can cause one to laugh or pull out your hair 

From my perch by the porch, I'm watching them play
Love is so simple, without words needing said
Filled with such spirit, two peas in a pod
Love is so simple, just watch it unwind...
Just as God made them...they are two of a kind........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Beaudre Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 8:40 PM
This is a sweet little poem, I enjoyed it a lot!
L Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 8:53 AM
there is something about the innocence of young children, they are indeed so lovely. nice poetry, and thanks for your kind comments. abe
Culverhouse Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 7:06 PM
Beautiful, you captured a great moment better than a photo. keep up the good work.
Christian Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 7:59 AM
aww beautiful written, thanks for your kind comments, God bless you
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 4:44 AM
Carrie, I see a winner here. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Bird Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 8:44 PM
Great poem Carrie, Labs are great dogs for children and it is a joy to watch a child love and play with her dog. Good luck in the contest you have my vote!
Johnson Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 6:19 PM
What an adorable poem. I am sure its a winner. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
Higgins Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 5:28 PM
Best wishes in the contest.
Loving Iii Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 4:55 PM
the enjoyment of moments like this are what grandchildren are for. the instant re-play of what you missed while you were working and your children grew. your second chance to do thing see things and feel things differently. and record it for us all. john h loving iii
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Interesting take on the idea. Keep writing. Sara
Rider Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Thank you for comments on poem placing in the contest. This is a sweet little poem also, good luck in this new contest also. Trudy
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