Two Men Walk Into a Bar

Two men walk into a bar one night Hurt like hell, punched out their lights When they awoke Strange words they spoke Sounded like a couple of ancient trilobites
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Amerasb Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Me & You
Ellison Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 11:03 AM
LOL
Burch Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Bahahaha!!! Well done Jack!!big hug Cap'n Deb
Ellison Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Hmmm! Cap'n Deb... LOL Love it!
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 12:51 PM
ha ha ha:-)hugs jan xx
Ellison Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Giggle away! Love, Jack xxx
Flats Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Hittites, Jebusites and trilobites//parasites, appetites, up-at-nights//my rhyming thing//that ding-a-ling//gots snow today and give-me-frights! PUNCH ON JACKSON!!! Way Mo Coffee needed! (white stuff on the ground:-(
Ellison Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 11:01 AM
WHAT???? Not the white stuff? Couldn't be!!! So sorry Mr. JOHN JOHN, we're going through our usual January thaw! YEE HAW Hang in there!
Vinson Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 7:32 AM
A dyslexic man walked into a bra....
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 12:52 PM
a guy walked into a bar .. he said OUCH!:-) hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 7:39 AM
You got a million of 'em!!! LOL
Vinson Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 7:37 AM
A man walks into a bar with a chunk of asphalt under his arm. He tells the bartender, "A beer please, and one for the road."
Ellison Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 7:36 AM
LOL!!!!!!
Vinson Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Going into a bar, a guy walked though a screen door. Really strained himself.
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