Two Lonely Souls

He was an old man, limping down the hall,
She was an old lady, leaning against the wall,
            He said," Isn't your name Ellen?"
            She said,"No, my name is Helen."

So here they met, in a hospital hallway,
             On a very warm summer day,
               He was 80, her age- 75,
    Neither had family still alive.

Two lonely, old people, wandering life's hall,
    Needing somebody to buffer their falls,
 Who would believe that in a hospital  hall they met,
               I would surely have lost that bet.

        Two lost souls, lonely and blue,
        Looking only for what was their due,
            A little company, a little love,
        Before their date with God up above.

        They found it there in that hospital stay,
                  It's with them still, to this very day,
                A Love so tender, a love so deep,
                  It will be theirs, forever to keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 4/18/2009 10:32:00 AM
This is just beautiful, Patricia !! Very well done and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup!! There's hope for me yet ... smile ... although I hope I don't have to wait until I'm in a nursing home ... LOL ... Congratulations on your writing being featured!!
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Date: 4/16/2009 6:57:00 AM
Hey! I'm 80 years old; I can get into this one, a poem after my own heart. Congrats on this selection no matter how old you are. Love, daver
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:36:00 AM
Nice work Patricia and congrats for your feature of the week...Raul
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Date: 4/15/2009 9:37:00 AM
A lovely story - and poem Congrats on having it featured
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Date: 4/14/2009 2:03:00 PM
They are two very fortunate souls. God bless them, whoever and wherever they are. You wrote their story so well. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:51:00 PM
What a wonderful and uplifting story. This poem has me smiling. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:11:00 PM
Congradulations on being featured this week-This poem makes me sad.-I am looking forward to reading more of your poems-fellow souper-Rhonda kay
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Date: 4/13/2009 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations On Your Poem Being Featured This Week.
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Date: 4/13/2009 11:47:00 AM
Patricia, I feel sad and lonely after reading this poem. Anyway, congratulations on your featured poem this week. Your friend in poetry, Ernilando
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Date: 4/13/2009 10:48:00 AM
I love happy endings. A beautiful story. Congrats on your awesome featured write this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:23:00 AM
I meant "congratulations", I just can't type today, lol, sorry bad typing today....Aleera
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:22:00 AM
Congratulatiaite, very hopeful, that even at the last phase of life you can find someone to share it with. Great write.....Aleera
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful write Two Lonely Souls being featured this week, well done! Cheers, Ernesto
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