Two Lenses

Two Lenses

     While studying Masters in my teens
   also in service in early twenties 
                 I was prompt and ready
                to catch the train in hurry 
   jumping from platform crossing rail lines

      Now I have turned senior citizen
     and always choose to avoid train.
         If go on compulsion,
          over bridge is solution,
 also by slow walk without strain

   02/27/16
             Two Lenses Contest  First Place
  Sponsor Sara Kendrick

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Date: 3/5/2016 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 2/29/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/29/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Sara. I am honored. Love. Anisha
Date: 2/28/2016 6:41:00 AM
Wonderfully contrasted... Loved this one.... congratulations Anisha
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/29/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Archana. Love. Anisha D
Date: 2/27/2016 10:42:00 PM
Is it Bongaon Local... LOL! Lovely write, Anisha. Are you really at your Sixties ? Then a million digital hugs, otherwise Namaskar. You know it well, why?...Bobby
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/29/2016 8:58:00 AM
Whats your profession ?
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/28/2016 6:47:00 AM
I am staying at the other side of the river Ganges, Ariadaha.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/28/2016 2:30:00 AM
No. While studying Masters,I was daily passenger from Serampore to Hwh. I was Lecturer in Burdwan Women's College. During that period the root was either from Durgapur - Burdwan - Sealdah or Hwh . Where do U stay ? Best wishes. Anisha
Date: 2/27/2016 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/28/2016 2:31:00 AM
Thanks Susan. Hugs. Anishab D
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