Two Lenses

Two Lenses

     While studying Masters in my teens
   also in service in early twenties 
                 I was prompt and ready
                to catch the train in hurry 
   jumping from platform crossing rail lines

      Now I have turned senior citizen
     and always choose to avoid train.
         If go on compulsion,
          over bridge is solution,
 also by slow walk without strain

   02/27/16
             Two Lenses Contest  First Place
  Sponsor Sara Kendrick
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A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:58 AM
Congratulations
Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
Dutta Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Thanks Sara. I am honored. Love. Anisha
Garg Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Wonderfully contrasted... Loved this one.... congratulations Anisha
Dutta Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Archana. Love. Anisha D
Tagore Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Is it Bongaon Local... LOL! Lovely write, Anisha. Are you really at your Sixties ? Then a million digital hugs, otherwise Namaskar. You know it well, why?...Bobby
Dutta Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Whats your profession ?
Tagore Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:47 AM
I am staying at the other side of the river Ganges, Ariadaha.
Dutta Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 2:30 AM
No. While studying Masters,I was daily passenger from Serampore to Hwh. I was Lecturer in Burdwan Women's College. During that period the root was either from Durgapur - Burdwan - Sealdah or Hwh . Where do U stay ? Best wishes. Anisha
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading.
Dutta Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 2:31 AM
Thanks Susan. Hugs. Anishab D
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