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Two Juxtaposed Scenes of Nature

Sky aloft Birds in flight Through clouds white Dots of light Lovely sight Out a frog From the bog Met a dog Friends on jog Both agog 4, Jan. 2022 What’s New Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joseph May

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/5/2022 6:53:00 AM

You crafted a great poem, Valsa. I loved the rhythm, especially in the second stanza. Best wishes for a contest win.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/5/2022 4:59:00 AM

I see the birds in flight in the sky above---and dog and frog on a jog below. Clever juxtaposition, Valsa.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/5/2022 1:56:00 AM

Frisky poem, loved its happy dance. Your friend.