Two Jacks

Jack Frost coughs he feels ill
And kinda off more than a chill
Jack Daniel’s introduced
No longer has the flu
Head spins sloppy drunk with thrill
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Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 12:05 PM
Ha! Two very different kinds of jacks
Jones Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 8:16 PM
lol! I’ve never tasted Jack Daniel’s as I don’t drink but I figure it is strong enough to cure a cold.
Wolf Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 8:39 PM
Jack D. sets the flu a-flying every time. Then again, what to do about that hammer inside my head? lol. Merry, Happy, and Peace, Karen.
Jones Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Lol! Hugs Happy Holidays dear Gershon!
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