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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 January 27

Image: Hawaii's Pipeline by T101

10 Best Surf Spots In Hawaii, USA | Trip101

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"Pipeline: Hawaii's North Shore where Championship Surfing Meets are held, remains the deadliest since records began in the 60s." Golden shores surfed duo gift essence new threshold, History made two by sea, Footprint holds their granule sunk traces, queues the bold, Long woods wee came two by sea, Boarders store their sea tools drift faces, cue behold, Fantasy dreams two by sea, Reckon calls pair home schools feet races fuel's the sold, Handily swims two by sea, Loop unfolds those who rules hunk intense corkscrew rolled, Gone absentees are two by sea, Fathom pulls remain cool surfaces, two consoled, Breathing-free crawls two by sea, Jettisons beached dual shift places cruise controlled, Rest at ease lays two by sea, Ponder hauls twain unspool whiffed graces schooled withhold, Bended knees pray two by sea, Covered boards bros no fools--but in case, 'Win the Gold', *Pipeline be? Two if's by sea? *HMS; Anapestic tetrameter.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/1/2023 2:35:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this exceptional poem, William:-)

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2023 8:20:00 AM

Thanks, Edward, as your challenges compel me to untried regions, Aloha William

Ann Peck

Date: 1/31/2023 10:37:00 AM

Beautiful poem, William--its rhythm like the waves. Congratulations on win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/31/2023 12:19:00 PM

I”m grateful, Ann, for your caring support and praise, Aloha William

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/30/2023 9:22:00 PM

Congratulations for your win :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/30/2023 9:46:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi, take care and blessings, Aloha William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/30/2023 7:48:00 AM

Back to congratulate again ro win TOP. Blessings

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/30/2023 2:13:00 PM

Thanks again, Anisha, I'm always pleased to see your post, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/30/2023 7:31:00 AM

Awesome write William. Congratulations on your win! :) Take care, God's speed,, Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/30/2023 2:11:00 PM

An admirable share, Linda, and yes, the surgery went ok, and will know the results tomorrow, mahalo and Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2023 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. I wish I was on your beach watching the waves. Have a blessed day/week..................

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/30/2023 2:04:00 PM

Yes, my dear Paula, beachgoers who go to watch, get to watch another day, but surfing bears another truth. My thanks and blessings as well, Aloha William

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/30/2023 6:53:00 AM

William, your poetry is beautiful and well-written, and congrats on your win, friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/30/2023 1:58:00 PM

Lasaad, I was guided by the title and went with it, thanks for the adulation, Aloha William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/28/2023 8:36:00 PM

Fantasy Dreams Two by Sea.. Fathom pulls…Breathing free crawls… Excellent. Sure to win. Have God Days.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/28/2023 9:36:00 PM

I’m hoping my take on the title is what’s intended—or close to it—Thanks so much, Anisha, for your focus, praise and support, Aloha William