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The older couple captured everyone’s attention the moment they all walked in the door… but she’s the only one who did not laugh as they danced across the floor “They are not the greatest dancers are they?” her friend snickered… “As far as dancing goes…. she keeps tripping on his feet while he keeps stepping on her toes.” “I’m not watching their feet.” she said “No…what I find totally entrancing… is the beauty on the faces when I see their two hearts dancing.”

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Date: 1/21/2020 3:05:00 PM
Wow! Love this, a superb ending to an enthralling write. Ron :)
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