Michael J. Falotico Poet Choka

Two Heartbeats

by Michael J Falotico

                                              With a door closed shut
                                            love can never walk inside
                                           and be the fresh air that can
                                               fill your heart and soul
                                               as a once lone thought
                                           is flowing with two heartbeats
                                             that can be carried as one
                                               with no room for tears.

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Dinda Minardi June 21, 2011 at 7:07 AM Awww... really sweet... This poem made me want to taste love... :)

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2011 at 5:43 PM always with feeling Michael, now this is one clock ticking for two heartbeats.. banding together as one.. i can feel the love transcending like one big drum heart beat.. sweet write... xoolio..p.d.

James Fraser May 10, 2011 at 11:55 AM The door of ones heart should always remain open, although they can be slammed shut at time. Fine poetry Michael....:)

Nette Onclaud May 10, 2011 at 10:33 AM smashing, michael! you leave me speechless..;) hugggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire May 10, 2011 at 8:45 AM We do have to keep that door open, Michael. Sometimes it is hard, but the rewards as you describe so well in this poem, are worth it! Excellent poem, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne May 10, 2011 at 7:05 AM Lovely write, Michael

Francine Roberts May 9, 2011 at 8:25 PM wonderful choka Michael

Sara Kendrick May 9, 2011 at 6:01 PM Enjoyed reading your work tonight..Yes a person has to be open for love to work..I am glad that you tried the Choka..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

May 9, 2011 at 5:15 PM Another lovely write Michael, reading you is like a breath of fresh air and thank you for your very nice comment. Love Alexa

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 9, 2011 at 4:32 PM Spelling was just fine.. I am thinking about u too Michael.. this awesome place is charming and dreamy.. makes one never want to leave .. well looks like we might stay in a year or so .. if all goes well luv.. missing u your Jersey Girl.. sempera amore'...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 9, 2011 at 3:28 PM yes ..and forever ..yes...brilliant words Michael ..absorbing the emotion u present in these elegant lines so passionately written my White Knight... your Jersey Girl in beach mode under the Italian sun..luv..