"two Hands,One Pen"

Two hands that can't touch

                    although the fingers hold one

                                                   a pen to create.







Dedication to Wilma & "The Mysterious Lady of Soup"
thanks to you both...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La France Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 7:40 AM
This is really nice, such a lovely dedication, anyone would love having written for them~~
K. Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 12:29 AM
ah I loved this tribute you have for these two wonderful ladies :) very touching for your lovely collaborators :) --nikko :)
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November 15, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Micheal, well written and a nice dedication!
Fraser Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 1:06 PM
Intriguing Senyru Michael. I think we'll have to Poirot in to reveal this "Mysterious Lady" nice poetry my friend >> James
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November 14, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Ah, so Wilma is not the "Mysterious Lady" of whom you wrote in your other poem. You are teasing us with this lady, dear friend, and we want to know who she is. But perhaps keeping her a mystery is a good way to build suspense and intrigue. Fine senryu about co-writing! Love, Carolyn
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November 14, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Alas all poets breathe the same air and create with these lines in mind my White Knight..of poetry.. your intro lines is superb and the following lines expressive ... enjoyed this happy GIANTS Sunday ..J.G. forever and always and more luv..
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November 13, 2010 at 12:19 PM
very interesting senryu and dedication too. WHo might this woman of mystery be? Luv, Andrea
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November 13, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Enjoyed your creativeness in this one..I am sure that Wilma enjoyed the honor..I was delighted that you enjoyed my work..Sara
Neels Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Pd's right Michael, I do love it! Could not help but smile so Pd also thought the mysterious lady was me? As for your senryu, thank you Michael for the honour of writing with you.. The amazing part is that once we start we have no idea what the end product would look like.. Enjoy your weekend ;)love Wilma
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November 13, 2010 at 7:25 AM
love this poem Michael,, I'm sure both will love this write as well. Now that helps with the Mysterious Lady, its not Wilma Neels. By the way she is one funny poet.. She had me smiling with her double comment this morning,, I also love her newest collaboration with you,, Have a nice one. And thanks for your comment as well sure made me smile,, p.d.
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