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I knew he would find his way there and back, we had practiced that. Quarters and pennies, he understood, counted them just as he should. Confidence prickles could easily be his many dimes and nickels. Born challenged, adding them was at times grim unless I helped him. My 22 year-old son had never dared a walk to the shopping square without me or someone else who cared, also walking there. True was his need to try and I truly itched for him to succeed. If something mean happened to him, I would need the bully to bleed. My son was upbeat, his confidence keen, so I didn't dare intervene. Praying, I saw him pocket his house key while walking away from me. I asked God if two, well-tested angels were free to guide his cash spree. I saw an hour scatter before my son came home all smiles and chatter. Lifting his arm, he said, ‘Mama, you must see this really cool watch. I can do it by myself, put it on, take if off, and close the notch - if I count to five, I stick it in the right hole every time and stuff.” Thinking him an absolute joy, I asked if his money had been enough. My son sat, and just like that, gave both his knees a loud slap. “Two golden ladies, you see, asked if I would let them pay for me. They hoped to fill a need by doing a kind Christmas deed. Can you believe that golden ladies would choose to help me? They smiled and paused to hug me after I said "Merry Christmas", then thanked them and told them twice how nice their deed was."

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Date: 3/23/2025 8:17:00 PM
Dear CayCay, I was absolutely delighted to revisit and reread this inspiring and soulful poem so beautifully composed from your loving mama’s heart. Those two golden ladies were angels indeed. Congratulations for your success in Mystic Rose’s contest. It’s an honor to share the podium with you, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/17/2025 11:06:00 AM
We never know where angels will show up and work miracles that reflect the purest love. Congratulations on your win, Cay Cay! Nice to have you back in the soup. Blessings to you!
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Date: 3/17/2025 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful story, we I see is true!
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Date: 3/17/2025 4:09:00 AM
Thank you for joining my contest. It isn't easy writing about Angels. You all took it to a new level of consciousness for me. Each entry dove me closer to the thought that Angels exist. You are all winners in my book, grateful for all your efforts. May God bless your beautiful hearts, each and every one of you Love, Mystic
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Date: 12/25/2017 3:56:00 AM
The kindness you shown simply came back to you. All the love youve been giving has all been meant for you. This write tipifies the Cay Cay I know. It lives on in young Kyle, your mother heart touched me too. Just when I thought the dream had died you came shining through. You made my christmas , you do
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Date: 12/19/2017 5:19:00 AM
The best and nicest things happen around Christmas... And every other day for that matter, great write CayCay.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/19/2017 7:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lewis. I agree, nice things happen all the time, it's just that good and nice are quiet, unlike bad and mean which are terribly loud. Enjoyed your comments. All the best to you ... CayCay
Date: 12/16/2017 8:18:00 AM
Wow! Your prayer for the two angels was well answered:) Merry Christmas to you and your brave son:)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/16/2017 8:44:00 AM
Two visits, I am blessed. Many read this and believe it to be about a young child, but I know you 'remember' my son because I recall how very warmly you've commented on other poems he inspired. I appreciate you! Love ... CayCay
Date: 12/13/2017 2:41:00 AM
What a sweet story! I could see it all....children are so precious. Treasure each day of childhood with your son. 'they grow up so fast...and they're gone.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/16/2017 8:45:00 AM
I'm late, late, for a very important date - thanking you for your sweet comments! Be blessed, Carole - If I don't get a chance later, please receive my wishes for a Merry Christmas! All the best to you and yours during the Holidays and ever onward ... CayCay
Date: 12/12/2017 7:36:00 PM
Hi Cay Cay, this is delightful and sweet. Many blessing for the season.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/13/2017 12:10:00 AM
Hey, long time no see or read - I need to remedy that. Its challenging to catch up with all things Soup after 7 months gone. Good to see you and I am absolutely delighted that you enjoyed my son's memory making adventure! All the best ... CayCay
Date: 12/12/2017 11:02:00 AM
CayCay, I loved your uplifting story depicting the spirit of Christmas. Best of luck in the contest. John
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/12/2017 1:42:00 PM
Yes, a true uplifting story about my special son. Truly a blessing that such a kind event happened to him. I enjoyed your comments and wish you all the best ... CayCay
Date: 12/12/2017 5:04:00 AM
This is so so beautiful, CayCay. An awesome Christmas story. You have such talent with telling a story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/12/2017 1:45:00 PM
No, no, no - thank you for being so receptive to my writes. I thought about visiting you last night, but my yawns denied me. I'm being a responsible adult today, so in between chores, I'll pop over to see you. All the best, Rhoda! Go in a good way ... CayCay
Date: 12/12/2017 12:19:00 AM
Beuatiful beautiful write,CayCay
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Date: 12/12/2017 1:48:00 PM
Thank you for leaving me a beautiful, beautiful comment! All the best to you, Anand ... CayCay
Date: 12/11/2017 6:59:00 PM
Such a heartwarming, heartstrings tugging write CayCay. I was so proud of both of you by the time I finished reading this awesome and uplifting write. Your moving message is excellently written and conveyed. I love how you used the word 'twice', twice in your loving poem and your 'two angels' were so kind. Your poem just toasted my heart to a rosy glow. Love it! Good luck in the contest but already a winner with me. Hugs my friend ~Susan
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/12/2017 1:50:00 PM
It just happened four days ago. Prior to that, I hadn't an idea for the contest. It was a blessed event that so cheered both Kyle and me. Thank you for your thoughtful and insightful comments, I love receiving them. My muse is still missing. Love ... CayCay
Date: 12/11/2017 2:27:00 PM
oh my gosh, Caycay. This deserves a TOP SPOT for sure!!! Love it, and love YOU (a funny side note, remember your letter from the other day. My captcha resembles that word. (with a 5 taking the place of the S) hahaha
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Date: 12/11/2017 10:06:00 AM
A touching story of kindness...apt for the holiday season--well told, CayCay!
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Date: 12/11/2017 9:04:00 AM
what a wonderful story CayCay!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/11/2017 7:52:00 AM
A little miraculous story where the spirit of Christmas triumphs dearest friend, Cay Cay! Hope you have a very Merry Christmas!
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