Two Friends

Tiredness seeps slowly away,
As night caresses after a hard day!
Warm and bright,
Day soothes the pains from night!
Two friends, ones' hard, other delight!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Chakrabarty Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:47 AM
Friendship between night and day as a metaphor represents what friendship really is: offsetting mutual deficiencies and enhancing mutual strengths.The diction"Tiredness seeps slowly away, As night caresses" or "Day soothes the pains from night!" drive the point home.Good luck Mansi.
Sharma Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Thank u so much for the words of appreciation! What a great explanation of the write!
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