Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Dizain

Notes About The Poem

I have another poem about heaven: "HEAVEN THROUGH THE EYES", but this time I summarized my thoughts of heaven in two ways.. :)

 Inspired by the verse, Revelation 21:4, He will wipe away every tear from their eyes, and death shall be no more, neither shall there be mourning, nor crying, nor pain anymore, for the former things have passed away.”... 

Whenever I feel happy in the presence of people who loves me and so of nature and each time I surpassed a trial, I thought somehow I already bit a piece of heaven.

 The first 4 lines tells how  I see heaven and also to what I've read from books esp the Bible, hence these my idea of heaven... :) 

 

 

Two Faced Heaven

TWO FACED HEAVEN


I walk slow in a globe of puffy clouds 
Dancing midair, a concerto, harp plucks
From right to left are angels in white shrouds
their velvet pulling psalms, my heart they struck
Amazed! I stopped. Behold. Entwine and stuck!
Has my one weary soul found its best home?
Roads I pass below, wobble and some foam,
all sprays a peacock of sadness and cheers.
I thank our God for all my harvest homes
as they remind me too: heaven is here! :) 

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Sponsor	Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name	Dizain Me 
Placed 1st


©O.E. Guillermo
07:55 pm, January 28, 2015

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:42 AM Olive ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE* Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 11:49 PM thanks much Skat.. :) God bless.. :)

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 10:40 PM I enjoyed finally seeing your dizain. Congrats for your win, sweetie. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 11:46 PM thanks much Andie.. :)! God bless.. ;)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 5, 2015 at 3:05 PM Back to congratulate you on your first place win, Olive, and to thank you for visiting my pages today. You are so sweet! Hugs, rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 11:46 PM thanks much Rhonda.. :) I appreciate your every drop by.. :)!

Grace Mutindi February 5, 2015 at 5:40 AM Wonderful poem...congrats on your win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 19, 2015 at 11:32 PM thanks much Grace. :)

Paul Callus February 3, 2015 at 3:19 PM Well done, Olive_eloi....I had a strong feeling this poem would do well, and so it is!!! Congratulations....and a top spot to go with it!!:) a holiday for a treat!! hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 7:34 AM thanks much PAul.. Iappreciate it.. :D! weee such trust in me is a wow!

Sandra Haight February 3, 2015 at 2:42 PM Hi Olive, stopping back to say congratulations on your 1st Place win for your beautiful poem. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 7:34 AM thanks much Sandra.. COngrats too. :D!

Earl Schumacker February 3, 2015 at 11:02 AM Hi Olive, Congratulations on your great win. I rated it a 7. I like the strange elements like the wobble roads and foam and peacock sprays. Nice touch. (Great structure by the way.) Have a wonderful day. Earl Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 7:33 AM :) aha.. i used them as metaphors Earl.. :)! weeee thanks much.. :D! Hope all your days are wonderful.. :D!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 3, 2015 at 7:27 AM I favved it your beautiful piece of writing rightly heaven is here! Congrats on win>rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 7:32 AM :) thanks you Rajat for favoriting my poem.. :)! Im glad you like it.. :D!

Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 7:08 AM Amazed!i stopped.behold.entwined and stuck... such beautiful lines... a well deserving win Olive... regards, nad! #7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 7:31 AM thanks much Nadiya.. :D! I apreciate it.. :D!

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 6:33 AM a heavenly write Olive many congrats:-) hugs jan x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 7:28 AM Thanks Jan.. :)! God bless you.. :) hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta February 3, 2015 at 5:19 AM Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 7:12 AM thanks much Dr. Ram for placing me first in your contest.. :)!

Sandra Haight January 30, 2015 at 2:40 PM I love where you went with your poem, Olive...heaven on earth and beyond...Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 31, 2015 at 4:20 AM thanks much Sandra... :) God bless us all.. and indeed that's how I see heaven,, :)

Paul Callus January 30, 2015 at 1:15 PM Interesting the bi-way you look at heaven! Your heaven sounds so beautiful and attractive...you are already moving that way, your faith pulling you in the right direction. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 31, 2015 at 3:17 AM thanks Much Paul.. :) despite all tests I've gone to all these times I really hope I am passing them all by then when that time arrives that life leaves me, I hope am all worthy to face God... :)! THanks much.. :D Happy weekend.. :)!

James Fraser January 29, 2015 at 1:02 PM More and more I'm learning about Faith. I hadn't heard about 'Two Faced Heaven' but I'll learn as I go. I so enjoy your writes about your Faith Olive, it's the simplicity and inviting words that lure this reader in. Good luck in the contest, James :) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 30, 2015 at 8:35 AM :) thanks James for the much generous comment.. :) as long as it will inspire you or anyone shall not stop writing about my faith.. :)!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 11:19 PM Hi Olive, this is a beautiful entry for the dizain contest...just check your syllable count on line 5...I'm counting eleven not ten. I hope you don't mind the help...hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 30, 2015 at 8:33 AM Thanks much Rhonda.. :) I am happy that you find this lil poem beautiful.. :) Yes I have corrected.. :) thanks much for the concern.. :)!

David Meade January 28, 2015 at 8:45 PM Nicely done . . . a special home awaits but yet we are surrounded by grace daily . . . you word shine with praise and glory. Well done, 7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 30, 2015 at 7:06 AM Thanks much David.. :) Your comments are much appreciated.. :)! God bless us all.. And yes pieces of heaven is scattered all around this world.. :)! but more there after death.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2015 at 7:28 PM - Olive, sitting here in the dark night to read your beautiful poem - Sleep will not come :) - Thank you my friend and good night - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 29, 2015 at 7:43 AM thanks much Anne Lise.. :) I appreciate that you like this poem.. :)! I hope you will have happy nights soon.. :) God bless you always my friend and night night.. :)//olive eloisa :D!