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I have another poem about heaven: "HEAVEN THROUGH THE EYES", but this time I summarized my thoughts of heaven in two ways.. :)
Inspired by the verse, Revelation 21:4, He will wipe away every tear from their eyes, and death shall be no more, neither shall there be mourning, nor crying, nor pain anymore, for the former things have passed away.”...
Whenever I feel happy in the presence of people who loves me and so of nature and each time I surpassed a trial, I thought somehow I already bit a piece of heaven.
The first 4 lines tells how I see heaven and also to what I've read from books esp the Bible, hence these my idea of heaven... :)