Two English Sonnets

WHEN A MAN LOVES A WOMAN

At first, he, smells her sweet perfume, eyes curves,
long bashful lashes, smiling eyes, red lips.
He, falls so hard for her – unsteady nerves,
and moves to grasp the sun, the moon – he flips!

On knee - he bows, proposes on a whim.
He will find, life is hard – he screams, they clash.
Each storm, he tethers faults – the light grows dim,
but then he questions mind - has he been rash?

She’s so fun and he laughs at her smart joke,
adores the wrinkles on her face – they smile.
His heart beats strong, beneath his shattered cloak.
old man’d do all for her - his domicile.

He was drawn, at youth, to her beauty fair.
Autumn’s aged wisdom, breathes, of love’s affair.

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WHEN A WOMAN LOVES A MAN

Her muscled hero, working strong, and cute.
He lifts her high, with just one hand, in use.
With windswept hair, a toothy smile – to boot,
he makes her an offer she can’t refuse.

A ring of solid gold, at first they thrive.
Invasion of stiff habits -  trying, rude!
Aglow his balding head, his hair deprive!
She opens eyes,  asks self - why dost thou brood?

After all he is human, she proclaims.
He takes out trash, mows lawn, provides, is kind.
He’s always by my side, thus she reclaims.
He is the best! None better she will find.

And strength is found, in given years of life.
Blind eyes, love opens wide. She, smiles – his wife!

12/7/2016
Two English Sonnets Contest/Sponsor – Mark Massey
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Allison Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 3:51 PM
beautifully romantic Kim many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Thank you, Jan!
White Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 8:13 AM
I love your two romantic sonnets.And in how lofe works out in years and years of marriage... Congratulations :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, Darren! I know my husband and I are experiencing blessed years from much work. Happy New Year!
Nusker Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Beautifully expressed love from both sides. A 7 for sure.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Appreciate it! :)
Gupta Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:20 AM
Beautiful work here ... two audibly distinct flow and rhythm in the two sonnets and that again matching the gender ... in both the rhyming couplets are impressive ...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Thanks so much, Probir!
Wolf Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 10:17 PM
A wonderful job here, Kim! You will do well in the contest of that I'm sure!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Thank you, Rick! Intense, to write a sonnet! Thank you for your support!
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