Deborah Burch Poet Limerick

Two Elephants

Two Elephants

There once were two very large elephants
Who, night and day, ate only jelly-ants
'Till one day one said
To the other one, "Fred,
I do believe you have on smelly pants!!"

deborah burch©
6/10/2012

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... Gigno February 10, 2013 at 6:20 PM !!!

David Williams June 13, 2012 at 7:30 AM Cap'n Deb congrats on your win..very funny ...David

Kim Merryman June 12, 2012 at 8:32 PM Cute, Deborah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown June 12, 2012 at 7:23 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 12, 2012 at 2:28 AM Big Congrats Debs so funny love it xx soup

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2012 at 9:44 PM hahaha, this is a funny one to picture. Congrats on your win.

Ralph Taylor June 11, 2012 at 6:46 PM Congrats, Deb. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. hugs., Ralph

Gwendolen Song June 11, 2012 at 1:58 PM Debbie....u BIG kid, U! Funny limerick! :) Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2012 at 12:41 PM DEB, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK,,, XOX~PD

Nette Onclaud June 10, 2012 at 1:21 PM yayyyyy, laughing non-stop, deborah.. cool piece with winning hugggs!

Russell Sivey June 10, 2012 at 1:01 PM Ha Ha!! I just love this very clever write my friend! You are a genius! What a fabulous and excellent poem Debbie! Great Work!!

Josie Whitehead June 10, 2012 at 12:08 PM HA HA - EXCELLENT - 10/10 Debs. What fun!!! I'm so glad you found a use for elephants and smelly pants, ha ha. I'll be laughing all evening.

David Williams June 10, 2012 at 12:00 PM Cap'n Deb, ha haaaaaaa, you really are a nut, but love ya...David

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2012 at 10:24 AM Sweet and funny Deborah ! - oxox love Anne-Lise Deborah Burch June 10, 2012 at 11:08 AM thank you deat Anne Lise :) i was visiting josie and this is what came of it... love ya,deb