Two Drops of Tears

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tears rip at the seams of memories’ betrayed  trust
like liquid fists gushing through desolate waterfalls
gargling bloodied sobs upon lungs lumped with crust,
wet, wet on crumbled sagas  of  tortured, brick walls

this is the pang of swallows falling dark… the pain,
of a painful tear ravished by sins doubly committed
by spiked wrists  slit by eyes’ deceit  on pelted rain,
cracks of tinctured vapors stain these suds not quite acquitted

                   

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still, there are tears robed in delight of embroidered nights
and perching there, radiance’s rafters spin overlapping joy,
swarming the soul with giant suds  whitening all whites
as  giggles  lift cottoned pillows only love’s fullness can buoy

i think of rekindled homes knighted by flutes’ ripeness
where children paddle days virginal without attic of fears
a maze of hoisted jaunts open zipped stars’ need for madness,
in times marinated gingerly sweet by life’s lush beat... such are tears,

they cleanse all. they crawl out of soul’s  dual spears.


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(( for HGarvey Daniel Esquire's " Personify a Tear ))
     by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Nette. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
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April 22, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations on your win this creative work..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Marvelous content and a perfect example of a verse which cries out for capitalization and periods ;) you are attempting a formal rhyme scheme and using an informal formate? Congrad's on your win [nette& I are just dicussing NO worries!] Light & Love
Neels Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on another awesome write on the winner's list Nette ;) *hugs*
Freeman Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Great to see you in the winner's list, Nette. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Congrats Nette!Yet another wonderful win for you--kash
Richards Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations once more, Nette, for a exquisite rendition of a tear!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 4:23 AM
Congrats Nette dear friend on your terrific win in HG's contest on tears.. a most expressive and touching emotional write and entry for competition... enjoy another top spot with luv.. hope u are enjoying vacation time.. miss u so much..luv..
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, nette
Mannan Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:53 PM
Wow, thats all I'll say. Many congrats, Have a blessed Easter.
Johnson Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:34 PM
Congratulations on your win with this well thought out poetry. Love Joyce
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April 21, 2011 at 9:31 PM
Dear Nette, Thank-YOU For YOUR Support in My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on Your 4th Place Win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG
Fahey Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 4:23 AM
How did I miss this beauty?!! You have such a gift with words. Ellen
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April 1, 2011 at 2:58 PM
What a wonderful outpouring of emotion in your poem, Nette. The sad and happy tears are such a great release. I hope your life is filled with only tears of joy. Best wishes for success in HG's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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April 1, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Nette dear thankxx so much for your lovely words on my Family Forever piece.. having them all here these past few days and so much luv and affection between everyone just is so emotional luv.. enjoying every moment ..soon all will go separate ways again.. happy weekend and did u see my baby photo on my blog yet? it may become a new trend on P.S. to download baby photos ..fun yes?
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April 1, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Just wonderful nette!another gem from you-kashinath
Brown Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 5:22 AM
Another week has come and gone and I haven't been able to read as much this week as I had wanted. I am glad I was able to read your poetry today Nette. The best to you in HG's contest. Keep your pen scrolling don't let the ink dry up. I hope you have a wonderful weekend of sunshine and joy and find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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March 31, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Intensely beautiful write Nette my friend.. the tear has a personality all it's own luv and very emotional too.. good luck in the contest ...am sure will be in top ten without a doubt luv..good luck.. S.M. too..
La France Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 5:49 PM
Just beautiful, nette, you are a gifted poet, best of luck in the contest~~
Beck Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 3:40 PM
my goodness....another gem to add to the coronet ( coronette?)( joke)...especially "liquid fists" "lungs lumped with crust"......all the words seem to conjure themselves from a mind perpetually at play in a dictionary...I admire your work Oh yes (not joke)....by the way you need not pay for the second verse I wrote (joke) unless it is in american dollars(joke)...yours sincerely (not joke) Syd (joke?)
Parker Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Yes, some tears water the quilted fabric, and some tears stain through the worn seams! Nice twining of pain and joy!
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