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Two Different Pair of Shoes

She knew not of a simple life, only a complicated oblivion- She sought not material things, just imagined a good world to live in. She believed not in herself, yet in other’s opinions and notions- She was a compassionate woman, full of love and devotion. One day she’d cry, the next she’d smile- One day she’d comply, the next she’d defy. She wore two pair of shoes. Each pair for a different mood- She knew only joy then sadness, her sanity turns into madness. One pair red, one blue, one very high, one too low- Her inconsistency grew, here and there, to and fro- On which path should she go? One pair shiny, one dull, one very smooth, one too soft- Each separate foot left to mull, she was quite confused too oft- Downward spirals then aloft. She knew not of an elementary life, but knew she had too much to lose- for she was just a mother and a wife, wearing two different pair of shoes. written about my struggle with mental illness. August 5, 2017

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Date: 8/6/2017 2:53:00 PM
This is beautifully written and the most original take on the theme. But you have strength clearly. Through my own struggles and my own commitment over the past forty years to fight and keep fighting(with the help of the right prescriptions)I am at a point where I can see a bad day is just a bad day, not forever. Thanks so much for sharing.
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Date: 8/6/2017 4:39:00 AM
I know all too well the struggled of mental illness! I have bi-polar disorder, I am medicated, and it is stabilized but there was a time long ago when I wasn't! I too would go high then low, I would be manic then depressed in a matter of days, or even hours at times! It's a terrible disease especially if not treated! I'm thankful that I'm stable now, and that I have a loving family to help me through those days at which I struggle sometimes! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/6/2017 6:07:00 AM
I too suffer from BP. I am also healthy and happy for about 9 years now. I was writing this as if it was 9 years ago when I was truly struggling. thank you! :)
Date: 8/5/2017 10:49:00 PM
Beautifully written my friend...we all battle with things in life...mental illness is no stranger...hopefully you fully overcame it...god bless...^WW^
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/6/2017 6:07:00 AM
thank you WW! :)

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