Two Days Ahead

I must try and lead my dreams,
to where the lost and unforgiving answers,
rejuvenate their circle.

Two days, have somehow passed
and my eyes are half empty.

I still need to sleep.

Two days, ahead now
and my eyes are half full.

Hence, the satirical tear shed,
to hypothetically cleanse....

absolutely nothing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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George   Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 7:04 PM
Hi Rebecca, congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week. lainie
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August 5, 2008 at 4:37 AM
Congratulations Rebecca on your excellent poem being featured again. Love, Shar
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August 4, 2008 at 8:51 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week! very well deserve! nice write warm regards GiNo,18,Philippines
Jordan Avatar
August 4, 2008 at 7:10 AM
Rebecca - Congrats on this very interesting poem being featured this week
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August 4, 2008 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations Rebecca on the re-featuring of "Two Days Ahead." Vince
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