Two Comparable Contrasts
what i say about Tim
Extends to Solemn Kim
Starting with moustache grim
and two eyes oddly dim;
Two Voices for God’s Hymn
Happy to uplift Him….
But I think Tim is slim
And Kim rather The Plim,
Tim following his whim
Prepared to challenge Kim
And even rubbish him!
Kim fills cups to their brim
And Tube judges by Rim,
Tim, The One who can skim
And comprehensions trim…
So, they also contrast,
When one lets one’s look last.
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