Two By Two, They Took a Cruise

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As Noah gathered his flocks, and he gathered his herds
Two by two, from the frogs, to the birds
They would follow the leader, right into the ark
Indeed, he was told "Build a ship, and embark!
There's a flood coming soon, 40 days, 40 nights
Some thought he was crazy, his decision a plight!

Noah's two monkeys, had a devilish side!
They quickly jumped on the back of the elephants' hides
They took unfair advantage
Even carrying their luggage
While these jumbo sized taxis....gave them a ride

Horace and Doris were at the end of the line
As tortoises go, they would need extra time
Inching their way up, took an hour...so slow
While the rest of the group, cheered them on from the bow
till finally they were sealing ship's bolted door shut!

And soon rains were pouring, first sprinkles, then lots!
At dinner each night, as they would gather to dine
Like a cruise, quite gourmet, .....big buffets , even wine
They bought in the first course, a huge bowl of soup
In the hot broth was a rabbit, swimming in loops!!

"Oh Noah! Come quickly!"..."There's a hare in my soup!!"
And soon all the twosomes, were laughing and hooting

The ark was party, filled to the brim
Two for the road, and one for the swim

They would follow the leader, right into the ark
Indeed, he was told "Build a ship, and embark!
There's a flood coming soon, 40 days, 40 nights
Some thought he was crazy, some partied all night
But the risk was a good one, it seems he was right!

Circumstances might make us lose faith in our whims
And it might look as if all our chances are dim 

 
Do not give in !  Or at least have fun
For laughter's the best medicine under the sun!!


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/31/2016 2:56:00 PM
Yes ,I agree laughter is the best medicine.Congrats Carrie!
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Date: 8/31/2016 12:51:00 PM
Very good, Carrie. Congrats! Can anyone image the fragrances emitted from that species-crowded, floating arc? ;-)
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:26:00 AM
Wonderful write on taking risk, Carrie. congrats
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:09:00 AM
Wow Carrie u always amaze with ur splendid work! congrats on ur win!
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Date: 8/15/2014 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations.... Linda
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Date: 8/15/2014 7:20:00 PM
This is GREAT, Carrie; just loved it. Brought many smiles as I read. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:47:00 PM
this is so good Carrie full of humour congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:22:00 PM
Incredible write Carrie I was hooked from start to finish - love the humour here! Many congrats. hugs jan xxx
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