Two Boys and a Wise Man

Two Boys And A Wise Man ( Story/Poem ) Once there lived a wise old man. He lived on top of a hill. Everyday he would sit outside his porch and look down. He was very old and had a long white beard. The thing was that he could not see. He was blind, but he was very wise. People came from everywhere to see him and to seek his advice. In the village also lived two young boys, that were kind of mean. They wanted to play a trick on him. One said to the other - let's play a trick on him. We will get little bird and hold it in our hands, than go to him. We will ask him , if he knows what we have, if he guesses, then we will ask him if the little bird is dead, or alive? If he says he dead - we open our hands and let him fly. If he says it is alive, than we crush him. They went up the hill with the little bird. They said - wise man, wise man. The old man answered - yes, how can I help you? The boys said, can you guess what we have here? The wise man said - a little bird. They said yes, but is he dead, or alive? The wise man answered - he is whatever you want him to be. If you want him dead - he will be and if you want him alive - he will live. It is up to you, What do you want? The two boys left, they knew they could not trick the wise man...
04/20/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: The moral of the story is that no matter how old a person is - That person can be wise...

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Date: 4/26/2014 9:43:00 AM
Very nice..:) wisely composed..:) hope you doing well:), olive eloisa :) with a hug
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/26/2014 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much . I'm hanging in there, one day at a time.
Date: 4/25/2014 9:20:00 AM
So true. I have been blessed to spend most of my life caring for the elderly and being the recipient of their vast stores of wisdom and knowledge.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/25/2014 12:10:00 PM
Thank you for reading. I believe that the elderly have the wisdom, that young people lack. My Dad always said - if you don't take our advice, take the one that life gives you.
Date: 4/24/2014 1:00:00 PM
The power of inner sight's intuition equivalent to external sight. Wise means certainly that what you have expressed gloriously here, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/25/2014 12:11:00 PM
Thank so much Bi.
Date: 4/22/2014 4:49:00 PM
Wonderful words of wisdom Lucilla i loved this story, Hugs Jan x
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/22/2014 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I will get back to you.
Date: 4/22/2014 12:42:00 PM
Lucilla, I loved your story, it was so well written
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/22/2014 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much. I am glad you did.
Date: 4/22/2014 8:09:00 AM
I was glued to my seat, loved it Lucilla.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/22/2014 9:42:00 AM
I will anticipate your visit. Have a great day.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/22/2014 9:33:00 AM
Hi Richard ; sorry I have not been around. I was locked out for 6 days. Glad you liked my story/poem. I will visit you later.
Date: 4/22/2014 12:54:00 AM
Absolutly agree Lucilla with the moral of this story, it was beautiful, I wished it had gone on and on, I was actually glued to it...................Vera..............
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/22/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Vera, Some young kids think that because people get old - they are fools. Blessings
Date: 4/21/2014 10:18:00 PM
Hola, loved this one Lucilla, reminded me of this one I did http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=463901
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/21/2014 11:01:00 PM
Thank you Arthur, glad you liked it.
Date: 4/21/2014 6:36:00 PM
this is a lovely story. Where did you hear it from? Was it your own creation or had you heard it in your youth? WEll, Lucilla, I can see that you are BACK ON!!! I am so glad. Maybe my badgering Soup staff paid off!!!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/21/2014 8:26:00 PM
Thank you Andrea; I heard this a very long time ago. Thanks a lot for your help. They send me an email yesterday and said that they had unlock me. I was glad.
Date: 4/21/2014 9:16:00 AM
Very beautiful and thought provoking Lucilla..I love it Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2014 10:40:00 AM
Getting nicer it is 64 right now
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/21/2014 10:38:00 AM
Thank Tim. How is that Chicago weather? I used to enjoy the four Seasons.
Date: 4/21/2014 8:21:00 AM
Great story, my dear...YOU are very wise! :) Thank you for your soupmail.....I will respond shortly. I love how you worded this write. Sending you lots of hugs....
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/21/2014 10:33:00 AM
Thank you Eileen, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 4/21/2014 6:37:00 AM
- Birds destiny lay in their hands and thoughts ...... - A wise old man. - Thank you for a nice and well written poem dear Lucilla. - <3 U !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/21/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise, I was locked out of Poetry Soup for 6 days. I'll visit you later.
Date: 4/20/2014 11:23:00 PM
A wisdom filled write Lucilla..Buen trabajo!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/21/2014 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Ken, glad you liked it.
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