Two Boys and a Wise Man

Two Boys And A Wise Man ( Story/Poem ) Once there lived a wise old man. He lived on top of a hill. Everyday he would sit outside his porch and look down. He was very old and had a long white beard. The thing was that he could not see. He was blind, but he was very wise. People came from everywhere to see him and to seek his advice. In the village also lived two young boys, that were kind of mean. They wanted to play a trick on him. One said to the other - let's play a trick on him. We will get little bird and hold it in our hands, than go to him. We will ask him , if he knows what we have, if he guesses, then we will ask him if the little bird is dead, or alive? If he says he dead - we open our hands and let him fly. If he says it is alive, than we crush him. They went up the hill with the little bird. They said - wise man, wise man. The old man answered - yes, how can I help you? The boys said, can you guess what we have here? The wise man said - a little bird. They said yes, but is he dead, or alive? The wise man answered - he is whatever you want him to be. If you want him dead - he will be and if you want him alive - he will live. It is up to you, What do you want? The two boys left, they knew they could not trick the wise man...
04/20/2014 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: The moral of the story is that no matter how old a person is - That person can be wise...
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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Very nice..:) wisely composed..:) hope you doing well:), olive eloisa :) with a hug
Carrillo Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much . I'm hanging in there, one day at a time.
Sirak Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 9:20 AM
So true. I have been blessed to spend most of my life caring for the elderly and being the recipient of their vast stores of wisdom and knowledge.
Carrillo Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Thank you for reading. I believe that the elderly have the wisdom, that young people lack. My Dad always said - if you don't take our advice, take the one that life gives you.
Devnath  Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 1:00 PM
The power of inner sight's intuition equivalent to external sight. Wise means certainly that what you have expressed gloriously here, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Carrillo Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Thank so much Bi.
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Wonderful words of wisdom Lucilla i loved this story, Hugs Jan x
Carrillo Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Thank you Jan, I will get back to you.
La France Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Lucilla, I loved your story, it was so well written
Carrillo Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so much. I am glad you did.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 8:09 AM
I was glued to my seat, loved it Lucilla.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:42 AM
I will anticipate your visit. Have a great day.
Carrillo Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Hi Richard ; sorry I have not been around. I was locked out for 6 days. Glad you liked my story/poem. I will visit you later.
Duggan Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Absolutly agree Lucilla with the moral of this story, it was beautiful, I wished it had gone on and on, I was actually glued to it...................Vera..............
Carrillo Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Thank you Vera, Some young kids think that because people get old - they are fools. Blessings
Vaso Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:18 PM
Hola, loved this one Lucilla, reminded me of this one I did http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=463901
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Thank you Arthur, glad you liked it.
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 6:36 PM
this is a lovely story. Where did you hear it from? Was it your own creation or had you heard it in your youth? WEll, Lucilla, I can see that you are BACK ON!!! I am so glad. Maybe my badgering Soup staff paid off!!!
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Andrea; I heard this a very long time ago. Thanks a lot for your help. They send me an email yesterday and said that they had unlock me. I was glad.
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Very beautiful and thought provoking Lucilla..I love it Tim
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Getting nicer it is 64 right now
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Thank Tim. How is that Chicago weather? I used to enjoy the four Seasons.
Manassian Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Great story, my dear...YOU are very wise! :) Thank you for your soupmail.....I will respond shortly. I love how you worded this write. Sending you lots of hugs....
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Eileen, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Andresen Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 6:37 AM
- Birds destiny lay in their hands and thoughts ...... - A wise old man. - Thank you for a nice and well written poem dear Lucilla. - <3 U !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise, I was locked out of Poetry Soup for 6 days. I'll visit you later.
Carroll Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:23 PM
A wisdom filled write Lucilla..Buen trabajo!
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Ken, glad you liked it.
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