Two Birds

Clouds obscure the morning's bright sun
the heat already rises
A Sparrow lands upon the porch
His questions disguises

He was following a Redbird
Distressed at his pursuit
She noisily chattered just leave
You're different you brute
  

Out On The Porch
Sunday June 29 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kovrlija Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 8:22 AM
I always love reading your poetry.
Sivey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:40 AM
I believe you have painted a very wonderful and glorious write here my friend! I really loved reading this well timed poem this morning! Your rhythm of this piece is perfect, and the image of this poem is tremendous, I love the birds...the red bird is beautiful isn't it, especially the male! What a masterful poem, Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:05 AM
I can just see and hear this scene Sara...awesome poem.hope all is well
Sathasivam Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 5:39 AM
Excellent. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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