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Two Birds

Clouds obscure the morning's bright sun the heat already rises A Sparrow lands upon the porch His questions disguises He was following a Redbird Distressed at his pursuit She noisily chattered just leave You're different you brute Out On The Porch Sunday June 29 2013

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Date: 7/1/2013 8:22:00 AM
I always love reading your poetry.
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:40:00 AM
I believe you have painted a very wonderful and glorious write here my friend! I really loved reading this well timed poem this morning! Your rhythm of this piece is perfect, and the image of this poem is tremendous, I love the birds...the red bird is beautiful isn't it, especially the male! What a masterful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:05:00 AM
I can just see and hear this scene Sara...awesome poem.hope all is well
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Date: 7/1/2013 5:39:00 AM
Excellent. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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