Two Become One

By months, He's younger than her
Don't know which one brighter
All I know they became together
Building a love relationship so tender

She is my eldest blood related sister
I hope she knows, we love her
But since she knows him by a quiver
She wished he'll leave her never

On the fourteenth of this December
On the aisle, they will slowly walk
No second thoughts; no fever
For they are once two now one in tact..

By: olive_eloi
6:19pm
12/13/2014

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Fraser Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Indeed, two to become one, and it shall be done. Love the hope/desire in your poetry, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 1:23 AM
thanks much James.. this is for my sister.. :)
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December 24, 2013 at 5:20 AM
Olive, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:14 AM
hahaha i like that one.. sweetest poet destroyer.. :D anyways thank you so much for dropping by and reading my composition.. :) Happy HOlidays too,,, :)
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December 24, 2013 at 5:10 AM
- A lovely written poem, Olive ! - Happy Christmas - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 5:15 AM
loools.. thanks anne lise.. Happy holidays too.. :) it was really my pleasure to read comments from you.. :)
Sergi Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Olive a very beautiful write. Wish them both luck and love in thier life together.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 1:23 AM
thanks much Joseph.. :)
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