Two Become One

By months, He's younger than her Don't know which one brighter All I know they became together Building a love relationship so tender She is my eldest blood related sister I hope she knows, we love her But since she knows him by a quiver She wished he'll leave her never On the fourteenth of this December On the aisle, they will slowly walk No second thoughts; no fever For they are once two now one in tact.. By: olive_eloi 6:19pm 12/13/2014 --------------------»»»»

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James Fraser

Date: 11/22/2014 2:37:00 PM

Indeed, two to become one, and it shall be done. Love the hope/desire in your poetry, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/23/2014 1:23:00 AM

thanks much James.. this is for my sister.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 5:20:00 AM

Olive, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/29/2013 5:14:00 AM

hahaha i like that one.. sweetest poet destroyer.. :D anyways thank you so much for dropping by and reading my composition.. :) Happy HOlidays too,,, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2013 5:10:00 AM

- A lovely written poem, Olive ! - Happy Christmas - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/29/2013 5:15:00 AM

loools.. thanks anne lise.. Happy holidays too.. :) it was really my pleasure to read comments from you.. :)

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/22/2013 7:43:00 AM

Olive a very beautiful write. Wish them both luck and love in thier life together.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/23/2014 1:23:00 AM

thanks much Joseph.. :)