Two Baby Dinosaurs Learning To Fight

Come out and watch two baby dinosaurs having a match...
will they hurt each other or enjoy this experience as they stutter?
How long will it take for them until they become groggy and itch?
All kids love this kind of friendly fight as they shout," Punch harder!"


Jeff and Garry creep, trying to get closer, but they push them off
with their enormous feet groaning as two vexed grizzly bears...
" Look out, Garry...they ares aiming at you! they seem hungrier than a wolf!"
But Garry in shock replied, " Compare me to an aunt being crushed by beasts!""


Garry, getting up, finally caught his breath screaming," Keep away,
just watch them fight, we're here not to cause any troubles today!"
" Fine,"  Larry said withdrawing his excitement which had built up too fast,
and as the little dinosaurs continued to improve their skills, a lightening hit.


Poor dinosaurs they didn't know what was happening, they only felt the quaking ground
and quicker they fought resembling two animated robots spinning around,
trying not fall on the grass and make a hole wider than a volcano's crater...
then they gained control and went on with their fight to be amused by the kids' laughter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/21/2011 6:26:00 PM
i love it...p.d.
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:42:00 AM
Big smiles reading this poem, Andrew! The dinosaurs in the cartoon did look like children's toys. Jeff and Garry gave me quite a laugh as they tried to evade the grizzlies. Very amusing poem! Best wishes for success in the contest. Love and blessings for a happy Easter, Carolyn
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