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Two Autumn Tetractys

Trees Are bare With sky holes A solemn gray Like Whistler’s Mother calm resignation Leaves Flutter In the wind Drop one by one We find the autumn smoke from field and hearth

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2012 8:29:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Daver. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 9:44:00 PM

DAVER,, I'VE BEEN SEARCHING IN ALL HIGH PLACES... but can't think of, what one can do in a smoke field sky... i love it though... enjoyed,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 1:06:00 AM

rereading these again. So nice they are! thanks for your comments Friday, Daver.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2011 3:43:00 PM

Good one that is very descriptive about autumn..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am watching when I can the events of nature..My Barlett Pear is about the Barlett Pear tree in my yard but my thoughts were going toward the fact the doctor said "you are old and you are only going to get older and your condition is only going to get worse"..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2011 10:04:00 AM

So glad you tried this new form, Daver. Really enjoyed your description of Whistler's mother's "calm resignation." Fits in well with the autumn mood. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/10/2011 8:49:00 AM

so smooth and full of vivid images with the last line that clinches the whole scene, daver..: huggs with winning wishes!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2011 9:16:00 PM

Love them both Daver, The first made me smile and the last is awesomly beautiful. Nice on both.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2011 5:14:00 PM

I really love the first one. INdeed, calm resignation can describe a late Autumn sky!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/9/2011 4:17:00 PM

* “I Do Not Know But I Seem to Find A Touch of Somber Gray * My Dear Precious Daver * Perhaps Its Change of Weather In The Soon Passing Colours of Another Autumns Gone, Yet * Gazing Beyound The Horizons * Whether Gray The Day or Sunshine Blue * I Always Find A Ray of Brilliant Light * That Guides Me Through * Thank You * For The Kind Visit & Congrad * Luv Always * Sarah.” *

James Peranteau

Date: 11/9/2011 10:30:00 AM

Ah yes dear poet ! A welcome season indeed for this soul as well ! Great write sir, and I hope the season to come will inspire your writes as this one Dave ! Have a beautiful Autumn my friend....much love, james

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/8/2011 11:14:00 PM

Very well done, Daver! And I do remember you love trees. It shows! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your congrats on my featured poem. Best wishes, Caroline.

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/8/2011 3:18:00 PM

Very well explained, Sir. A descriptive write indeed.

Tony Lane

Date: 11/8/2011 11:55:00 AM

Well done Daver. Tony