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Nothing like the Angels I saw, plus mine had no wings!

Again another day has come to pass, I sit here sober, looking at an empty glass. For if I could tell you the things I've seen, You would reply, I'm living in a dream. I've seen two angels in my lifetime, Both in spirit, both shared a sign. One held my heart in her open palm, As I lifted my head still remaining calm. The other appeared to me when I was at death's door, She hovered above the ground never touching the floor. I saw a golden vessel it was right by her side, Containing all knowledge inside it did reside. But my eyes were fixed on the beauty she did bestow, Surrounded by coloured textures and how they did glow. Exhilaration filled my mind I was no longer in fright, I just couldn't believe this beauty was in my sight. So this is my story of when I had died, Now I'm a firm believer in the other side. And if you doubt what I have said is true, Then you shall see with your own eyes too.

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/14/2017 7:56:00 AM

You are most welcome White Wolf. I mean what I say and I will return to your page soon. Enjoy the morning.

White Wolf
Date: 3/14/2017 8:21:00 AM

You too, Lisa /|\

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/14/2017 7:20:00 AM

Hello White Wolf. Good Morning. I see such beauty within your words and thoughts not to mention flow. Your words are as gentle as an angel itself. The rhyme is in excellent form and never forced. Very poetic I say. Well done throughout.

White Wolf
Date: 3/14/2017 7:36:00 AM

That is truly an encouraging comment, and for that, I thank you my new found friend /|\

Angela Yousef

Date: 3/10/2017 9:22:00 AM

Very nice and personal thanks for sharing I had a similar experience with my guardian angel except I was not dead she woke me up from my sleeping.

White Wolf
Date: 3/14/2017 7:35:00 AM

Yes, fear of death is a fallacy. Thank you for stopping by, Angela /|\

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/28/2017 1:14:00 PM

The problem is the empty cup.... mine is always full.... Cheers

Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/4/2017 1:35:00 PM

Always...

White Wolf
Date: 2/28/2017 5:49:00 PM

Then you are blessed, thank you /|\

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/17/2017 8:53:00 AM

Wolf, thank God for Two Angels and thank you for sharing with us. As you said, they changed your life forever and I believe your words will further the message of change. Powerful!! My best, chuck

White Wolf
Date: 2/18/2017 2:40:00 AM

Thank you, Chuck /|\

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2017 8:41:00 AM

Very nice write and interesting :)

White Wolf
Date: 2/12/2017 5:44:00 PM

Thank you very much, Heidi /|\

Space Cadet

Date: 2/10/2017 1:10:00 AM

I like this and the "twist" at the end. Nice Work, WW. -- WC

White Wolf
Date: 2/10/2017 1:16:00 AM

Thank you, Wesley! The first one is a long story, but the second one appeared when I actually died in ICU a couple of years ago!

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/9/2017 12:06:00 AM

I knew you were an ambassador from heaven, Wolfie... meaning you are in touch with your Angels...all poets are conduits of Angels...many just don’t know it yet...we are messengers of the messenger’s lol...I’ve had similar experiences, my friend...the Angel on my shoulder is the Arch Angel Metatron...he is the Angel that gave me my name...he is the one that sends silent whispers of life, lament, laughter, and love...I’m glad you found yours...write on my friend...god bless...^WW^

White Wolf
Date: 2/9/2017 4:49:00 AM

Kahlil Gibran: "A poet is a bird of unearthly excellence, who escapes from his celestial realm arrives in this world warbling. If we do not cherish him, he spreads his wings and flies back into his homeland! /|\

Carol B.

Date: 2/8/2017 11:38:00 PM

I so believe in angels. Delightful poem!

White Wolf
Date: 2/9/2017 4:46:00 AM

Good to know! Thanks, Carol /|\

Sara Ella

Date: 2/8/2017 11:25:00 PM

I think it was more than a dream and you are blessed <3 This is a wonderful poem Budgie!!!

White Wolf
Date: 2/9/2017 4:44:00 AM

Yes, they were more than a dream! They were visions! Thanks, Sara /|\

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2017 5:34:00 PM

This is SO wonderful, White Wolf. I sure hope I have a guardian angel. If I do, she works mostly on the freeway for me!! I've escaped quite a few accidents. Gotta fave this one.

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 5:56:00 PM

Yes, our freeways get rather hectic too over here! Thank you for such a lovely comment, Andrea! And take care out there /|\

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 2/8/2017 4:40:00 PM

This is so beautiful, Budgie!!! I do believe in Angels - I cherish my guardian angel a lot... <3 Loved this one :)

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:56:00 PM

I still doubted after the first encounter but after the second! Well, what can I say, I'm a believer too! Thanks, Claudia /|\

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/8/2017 8:30:00 AM

Very nicely brought out ... Love it ...

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Probir /|\

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 2/8/2017 7:48:00 AM

Love this. Do not doubt you at all. I'm a firm believer in angels.

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 4:50:00 PM

Thank you, Elizabeth /|\

John Herlihy

Date: 2/8/2017 6:13:00 AM

A very insightful poem. Why do I say this, perhaps not for the usual reasons. The detail for one thing you include here bringing the reader into the depths of the poem. The rhyming is unexpected, rather than expected, thus reinforcing the rhythm of the couplets. Then the idea, the angels, you don't need to be a poet to seem them "with your own eyes". Nicely rendered. John

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 6:25:00 AM

You're welcome anytime with comments like that, John, Ha, thank you mate /|\

Chris Green

Date: 2/8/2017 5:48:00 AM

Nice one Rick, this felt soft and soothing to read as well as ponder the thoughts and the visions you have penned.

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 5:53:00 AM

Sorry, Chris, that comment jumped up into yours! Haha, Thank you mate /|\

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 5:50:00 AM

"Death a celestial pillow is upon which the soul rests for a while dreaming of the life to come!" Exactly, very well worded my friend! And thank you for another poem to check out! /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/8/2017 5:42:00 AM

I, for one do not doubt my friend, White Wolf proof my many poems I have written on the subject among them " Life In Eternity"! Superb writing depicting accurately life on the other side! " Death a celestial pillow is upon which the soul rests for a while dreaming of the life to come!" Demetrios. Congratulations and a seven!

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 5:51:00 AM

Death a celestial pillow is upon which the soul rests for a while dreaming of the life to come!" Exactly, very well worded my friend! And thank you for another poem to check out! /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/8/2017 1:47:00 AM

- I have no doubt that angels, found on "the other side" - But I do not believe in "Heaven and Hell" - A beautiful poem, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf
Date: 2/8/2017 1:53:00 AM

No, the concept of a Heaven and a Hell is just a bit rich for my blood too! Thank you, A-L /|\